DoubleDandE [2019-08-09 17:33:03 +0000 UTC]
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The shading on these characters never ceases to amaze me. I like it. In some areas it looks really well done, specifically the second panel where the guy’s face is in a dark deep shadow, while the other is in the sunlight (or view of a light source). Not to mention the gradient you’ve shaded in for the sky in various parts. They look great, specifically the bottom one which is filled with many colors to show sunset I believe. However I feel the one that happens at night looks a bit too dark- try using a darker purple/blue mixture (you may have to experiment with this) for a night sky effect. But I do like how the moonlight reflects off from the clouds though, and it adds a nice effect.
Another suggestion would be to leave some space while doing this, especially something like this, or have thicker borders around the images so our eyes can easily split and soak up each work done in each panel. But other than that everything looks great. I like how you’ve used various shading tactics on the characters, even some that are darker skinned to green skinned even. The expressions on the face look rather great and we can discern what each character is feeling and how. I feel the guy in the bottom with the dark eyes is a bit too dark as we can’t see his circular pupils (the broad shouldered guy making a dissatisfied look), but other than that great work as always.
The line work looks great, and doesn’t feel out of place alongside the pencil work you’ve done on the drawing. The lines blend well with the shading, and I like how everything looks rather smooth when you lay down your colored pencils. The anatomy is looking great though.
Keep up the great work.
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animafuture In reply to DoubleDandE [2019-08-22 02:03:21 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the delay to reply!!
I love your comments ~ they are very complete full of useful tips that help me a lot to improve.
Thanks so much for the tips and attention you got to notice every detail of my drawing!
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