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SIGUIENTE--->


TRASLATION!

Monogram: Agent P!!

*arrow: Planty the pottedplant*

Monogram: Thank you Planty the pottedplant for giving Agent P companion. You can leave now.

Monogram: Agent P, we're sorry to inform that your retirement is still in process. That's the price for being the best agent we ever had.

Monogram: We should introduce you both but I'll skip that since you two know each other thanks to your respective owners.

Monogram: Anyway, because of the recent activity and supicious conduct in Thomas Fletcher-Doofenshmirtz, we've decided to catalogue him as "Potential threat" instead of "Evil genius".
The boy should be under constant vigilance and there's no one better than his pet to take care of this, as Agent P kept an eye on Phineas, Ferb and their inventions, guiding them trough the right pat. Agent P has accopmlished his mission with honors.

Monogram: Marie Flynn doesn't seem to be a real threat, that's why any other agent has been asigned to the area.
*Steve dissapears*
Monogram: But don't worry, freshman, this time we got some external help so you can get into your mission calmly.

Monogram: Please welcome your new accomplice. Vanessa Fletcher is covering you both if neccesary.

Vanessa: Hi, Perry, Steve. From now on we're on the same team.

Vanessa: You DO realize that I'm doing this for my son's sake and I just kept the secret for the car you gave me in exchange of me being quiet, right?
What I can't stand is that you consider Thomas as a "potential threat" for my father's record. That's just--!!

Monogram: Thomas Fletcher and Marie Flynn are their parent's successors, their constant meetings with Heinz and his influence on them concern us as Agency and that's why we require your services.

Vanessa: Wait a minute. Are you saying that just because I'm my father's daughter you didn't erase my memory to forget everything about Perry so you had a secret "weapon" when my father wanted to influence a possible future grandson?

Monogram: Agent P and C, please go to your training, this may take a while...

MEANWHILE.

Jazz: Hey, Thomas! That's a cool watch, did your dad give it to you?


EMPTY SPACE:
Pao: Don't you think we should explain the next page?
Ely: That's what fanfics are for.
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Comments: 101

Dredwardfinn [2016-05-18 08:34:53 +0000 UTC]

And the creator yes but I thought you guys on 3 wheres the other one ?? (Bad grammar)

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ScircusCeledon [2016-05-05 03:36:26 +0000 UTC]

hay el espacio vació se me dio risa hahahaha

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stefany01 [2014-02-23 16:46:18 +0000 UTC]

La siguiente pagina es de monster no lo e podido leer todavía pues no puedo en mi tablet

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gorditacoqueta [2013-12-23 20:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Woh si, ese niño sería un increíble supervillano, tiene dotes de supergenio por ambos lados genéticos, una actitud derechita y un hermosos acento..... Debe ser el concentido de Doof... ji ji ji

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willdawson9 [2013-10-18 22:34:13 +0000 UTC]

ely's rockin' the carl glasses

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carmillad [2013-10-05 07:02:30 +0000 UTC]

JAJAJAJAJA, demasiado genial cuando aparece Planty la Maceta "sólo escoltando" a Perry.

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loverypinkrosestar [2013-08-06 23:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Perry se debe jubilar ya esta viejo y gordo

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rakish19 [2013-03-25 19:10:37 +0000 UTC]

que van a tener que explicar? este comic es un dolor de cabeza, pero me encanta!!!

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Aleksy [2013-02-28 18:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Apoyo a los fanficts jaj ha estado muy bueno

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Prinxcool [2013-02-16 05:17:18 +0000 UTC]

Seria genial que el Dr. Doofenshmirtz usara un rayo rejuvenecedor y que el Agente P siga joven :3 !!!
Adoro tu comic !!!

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Deiverlyn [2013-02-12 19:15:44 +0000 UTC]

una pregunta que son: Fanfic

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Leslie32001 In reply to Deiverlyn [2013-03-14 01:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Son historias inventadas o basadas en una serie, pelicula o libro, algunas son cortas y otras de varias partes.
Ejemplos:

-[link]

-[link]

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Juu-G [2012-12-24 04:46:45 +0000 UTC]

Great Job!
I love your art syle and color!
And whatsover, I like your patience and effort you spend on your comic. Me.... I'm just a "hey! let's draw a comic! lalalala awww i am not that kind of comic book artist" kind of girl.

I know it's already finished, but here's one suggestion that I look foward to the next pages of your comic. It's about so-called EMPTY SPACE.

On the next page, there are memories that Thomas had. And right before that scene, Jasmine asked Thomas about the watch that he has. And between those scenes, the EMPTY SPACE with you and some other girl appears. I know what your intentions are for, but some can find this little bit unconnected. Instead, I wish there was a scene Thomas thinking for a while. It's like this: Jasmine asks Thomas about the watch -> Thomas thinks for a while(the scene for EMPTY SPACE) -> He recalls his memories -> He says I don't want to talk about that.

Well, I told you earlier, I'm not a good comic book artist who has no virtues required for comic book artists. However, I am telling you this because I am the reader of this comic book. That is, I'm telling you this in the READER'S PERSPECTIVE.

Well, then, I guess this is the end of my suggestions.
Anyways, I like the more older version of Major Monogram. XD

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Angelus19 In reply to Juu-G [2012-12-24 10:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Well the Empty space is for Ely's and mine comments.
And the Thomas's watch is a shield .w.

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Juu-G In reply to Angelus19 [2012-12-24 11:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Um... Okay.
I said that because I thought it can make your cartoon more interesting.(I didn't mean that your comic is bad I put the word more in order to talk in the sense of relativity. Trust me) Besides, I didn't said change this page but I'm looking forward your improvements on the NEXT PAGES OF THE COMIC.

Well, sorry if made you confused. I was just saying that there should be constant flow and connection BETWEEN THE PAGES not just IN THE PAGE. Like, the plot flows pg.1 to pg.2 instead of pg.1 plot flows~~~~ HALT! next, pg.2 plot flows~~~~ kind of thing.

If that was your intention, well, go ahead. I will not bother about this page again.

Thanks for reading my comments.

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Angelus19 In reply to Juu-G [2012-12-24 12:04:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm married and i work, sweetie, IF i have time for the comic in spanish i do.

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Juu-G In reply to Angelus19 [2012-12-24 12:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Um....

Alright.

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nicko5649 [2012-11-18 00:16:54 +0000 UTC]

trabajaste mucho en la traducción cierto? XD

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Angelus19 In reply to nicko5649 [2012-11-18 00:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Ely se encarga de la traducción .w.

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nicko5649 In reply to Angelus19 [2012-11-18 00:28:51 +0000 UTC]

pues igual es demasiado en una sola pagina XD

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minimoose1231 [2012-11-10 20:20:12 +0000 UTC]

si los fic me parecen mejores que los comic, ademas tienes que picarle de pagina a pagina, y los fic al menos todo lo ocurrido se explica y dejamos salir nuestra imaginacion.

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Cracato [2012-10-10 04:10:21 +0000 UTC]

siempre me pregunte planty la maceta es la maceta o la planta es la maceta no

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PhinbellaThomarieFan [2012-10-08 00:45:57 +0000 UTC]

los fanfics los escribio.. QUIEN?

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lovez0 In reply to PhinbellaThomarieFan [2013-02-09 09:01:05 +0000 UTC]

creo que ely

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Diana-LoveStar-Ana [2012-10-07 16:29:08 +0000 UTC]

XD los mejores agentes e agente C, P Y planty la mazeta XD los adoro

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amilate5Nekiito [2012-10-06 01:30:59 +0000 UTC]

perry planty la maceta ya florecio xD y hay fics ?? quierlo leerlo uno >.<

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drake-rex [2012-10-05 04:01:11 +0000 UTC]

Gracias!!!!!! No se por que siempre todos se olvidan de planty la maceta YwY

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mariemandy [2012-10-05 02:51:46 +0000 UTC]

y ya hay fanfics ?
por que a la siguiente no le entiendo nada y ya lo quiero ver

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thomasymarie [2012-10-05 00:01:20 +0000 UTC]

genial noma pusz cuanto me ausente (creo que 2 o
3 semanaas)

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Agumon41 [2012-10-04 21:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Sabia que era perry

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Gaby6Alejandra [2012-10-04 12:26:11 +0000 UTC]

JAJAJA...PLANTI LA MACETA... JAJAJAJA!!!!

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mahaleht [2012-10-03 20:27:34 +0000 UTC]

O_o ely... ERES SUPER GUAY!!! (njo no soy española ¬¬)

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MelySky [2012-10-03 17:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Vanessa como parte del equipo de Mayor Monograma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Un giro muy bueno en la historia, la verdad no me lo esperaba!!!!!!!!!!!!

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isafireside15 In reply to MelySky [2012-10-04 23:11:12 +0000 UTC]

aunque algo lógico porque Vanessa nunca ha sido tan malvada

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daniindigo [2012-10-03 13:23:35 +0000 UTC]

esta pagina esta genial

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Mattpwnsall [2012-10-03 12:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Cute page

Aww, I wonder how that fanfic goes

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thomarie09 [2012-10-03 00:28:51 +0000 UTC]

me encanta eres la mejor

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PhinaBella-atic [2012-10-03 00:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Creo que esto sera complicado
buen trabajo me encanta esperare hasta la proxima

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Ephitia [2012-10-02 23:33:00 +0000 UTC]

¿Explicar la sig. pag.?

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Ephitia [2012-10-02 23:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Jajajajajaja, gracias por la bienvenida, jajajajaja

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yoselysa [2012-10-02 22:34:48 +0000 UTC]

q lindo me encanta , se ve muy bn vanessa es un@ de mis personaje favorito

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natysPnF [2012-10-02 22:33:27 +0000 UTC]

Vanessa!!!! ni siquiera se me ocurrió pensar que estaría con ellos XD

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macchato007 [2012-10-02 21:20:36 +0000 UTC]

bueno está algo incorrecto perry fue asignado con phineas y ferb debido a la cercania geografica con heinz, no porque phineas o ferb fueran una posible amenaza o por alguna posible inclinacion hacia el mal

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Angelus19 In reply to macchato007 [2012-10-02 21:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Consideremos que hay muchos agentes dentro de la misma área. Si fuese sólo por Heinz, tendría que haber sido asignado a un vecino .w.

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macchato007 In reply to Angelus19 [2012-10-02 22:36:15 +0000 UTC]

bueno

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123Memo321 In reply to macchato007 [2012-10-03 05:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Disculpa por meterme en la conversación pero; hay muchos agentes en el área ya que hay muchos genios malvados que se quieren adueñar del Área Limítrofe, y el camuflaje de todos estos agentes es ser una mascota preferiblemente no pensante, por lo que tienen que ser adoptados por un tercero (que viene a ser su dueño) sin importar en donde viva, y en la mayoría de ocasiones son los hijos los que convencen a los padres de comprar una mascota y la familia Flynn Fletcher vive en una comunidad en la que varias familias tienen hijos, por lo que varios de ellos pueden tener mascotas y algunas de estas podrían ser agentes.

Así que no creo que vigilar a Phineas y a Ferb haya sido una de las misiones que se le haya encomendado al agente P; pero Perry, al quererlos mucho, de seguro se propuso guiarlos y ayudarlos para que crezcan y se conviertan en personas de bien.

Con respecto a Thomas, al ser el nieto de un científico malvado, puede que Doof llegue a ejercer cierta influencia en él, razón para la O.S.B.A. que este hecho si es relevante, por lo que el general Monograma si le asigna la misión de guiarlo y evitar que en un futuro se convierta en un genio malvado.

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macchato007 In reply to 123Memo321 [2012-10-03 19:24:26 +0000 UTC]

bastante bien

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superalvichan [2012-10-02 20:41:10 +0000 UTC]

planty la meceta , y aun sigue dentro omg xDDD

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TheNargana [2012-10-02 20:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Mr Monogram is getting so much into Trouble ^^ I Love your First two Finished Stories, and i love the beginning of these^^ Please, continue with your fantastic work soon, you are drawing as good as the original owners. AND your Stories are SO incredible funny.

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ValeRossi1416 [2012-10-02 19:52:22 +0000 UTC]

ahhhhh!!!!! me encantó la cara de Thomas!!!! SE ve taaaan sexyyyy!!!!
O.O que fanfic?!?!??!? estoy ansiosa por leerlo!!!!

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