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AngelThatDraws — Hanna's new design + New style (BIO)
Published: 2017-02-11 23:07:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 882; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 1
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I think she's cuter now, and also i think this style is better than my older one :>EDIT 1 - and no, this picture doesn't have a light source, i should have made a light source, but now i can't change it :\
Name: Hanna Smitch
Nicknames: Honey, Han, Mis. Smitch
Pronouns: She/Her
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Especies: Human
Occupation(s): School Student
Age: 16
Birthday: 03/01/2001
Personality:
+Loyal
+Kind
+Affectionate
/ Tomboy
-Inattentive
-Anxious
-Over reacts
Likes: The color pink, short shorts, sports.
Dislikes: Makeup, Horror movies.
Backstory: Her real parents wanted to have a child, but couldn't afford having a kid, and when they were doing "the thing", the condom broke, and because they didn't have the money, they decided to put her on Saint Alize orphanage, so after they had the money they could adopt her back. She grew up on a good orphanage, she was pretty popular even, she was the "cool kid", when she was on school, she decided to dye her hair pink because she though it was cool, but was made fun shortly after, but she always had the support of the orphanage. And when she was 10, her real parents got the money to have a child and adopted her back, they explained her whole thing about the money, but she was still happy that she was adopted, and she visited the orphanage two days a week. When she was 16, she decided to go to the cinema with her parents, it was a horror movie, and one of the guys at school that made fun of her hair saw her in the cinema, and saw that she was really scared, so he and his friends decided to pull a prank to scare her, and it worked, and that’s why she's anxious and dislikes horror movies.
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Comments: 12
Wow love the backstory and the design, could you possibly do more. I would love to see whats next!
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thank you ;w;
and, i'm going to draw her soon, but not now :>
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Hi there! I am commenting from .
Pros: The colours mash well together, it looks very pleasing to the eyes. The shading and lighting is mostly correct and overall, its a well done, detailed piece which is very unique in its own, talented way.
Cons: Your position of the character is out, it looks like she is leaning on something, Try making it more straight or use a reference. This confuses me, you would be able to see her ears in this picture but you cannot, which makes it look quiet strange. I would also like to point out that her hair is too low down on the head. Where the hair is placed, makes it look odd for where the eyes and nose are placed aswell. Try lining everything up first in a diagram way, or , make the hair less flat.
Expressions. I cant really tell much about this character from the picture. All that I can think of is that she is calm. That's it, expression is critical in art. Try using that in a next picture to describe something about her!
This is such a beautiful piece, keep doing what you love! ~ Mellow from ProjectComment
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thank you for your critique! :>
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Commenting from ! First thing, the choice of color is very pleasant and they work well together to put emphasis on the upper body and face. The outfit is detailed enough to look unique, but simple enough to be believable in a modern setting. The shadows are nicely saturated which gives a more vibrant look to the image.
As for things you could work on, the first thing I notice is how unbalanced her posing is. If you drew a straight line in the center of her body, you notice both feet fall to the left of that line, and makes it look like she is leaning on empty space or about to fall, yet her upper body is perfectly straight. Another thing that could improve the image is to make her face a little bit more expressive. She seems to be winking, but her mouth and eyebrows give a more hesitant and vague look. This is especially true for a character design image, where you would want her face to show her personality clearly. Is she a happy person? Shy? Determined? I personally find it hard to tell with the image as it is, and tweaking her expression even just a bit could make that more obvious! ^^
Overall though, a lovely-looking character, nice, clean lineart and vibrant colors! Keep up the good work!
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thank you for your critique! :>
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