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DonutSeed [2016-11-29 17:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is beautiful! Her face and hair are lovely
Such a beautiful piece.

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nutty-stardragon [2016-11-22 15:42:19 +0000 UTC]

I could never find the right way to tell you
Have you noticed I've been gone?
'cause I left behind the home that you made me
But I will carry it along

And it's a long way forward, so trust in me
I'll give them shelter, like you've done for me
And I know, I'm not alone, you'll be watching over us
Until you're gone

When I'm older, I'll be silent beside you
I know words won't be enough
And they won't need to know our names or our faces
But they will carry on for us

And it's a long way forward, so trust in me
I'll give them shelter, like you've done for me
And I know, I'm not alone, you'll be watching over us
Until you're gone

Oh it's a long way forward, trust in me
I'll give them shelter, like you've done for me
And I know, I'm not alone, you'll be watching over us
Until
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pls dont judge me for copy and paste

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kmkibble75 [2016-11-11 01:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Hi! Here from ProjectComment:

The first thing that drew me into this piece was her eyes. They're beautifully done, leaving no doubt as to what emotions are roiling around inside her. The second was her hair, which is pretty awesomely done. The heavy bangs push us to look at her eyes, and the rest of her swirling tresses frame her beautifully while lending a sense of motion and turmoil to the picture.

However, the more we move away from her face, the less focused it seems to be, and not just in teh sense of sharpness, but more in the sense that I don't feel her arms and hands got as much attention as you gave her face.  Maybe that was your goal -- you wanted us to keep our attention on her eyes and tears, but her right shoulder seems out of balance with her left, and her forearm doesn't have quite the right shading to make it appear foreshortened, so it just seems shorter than her upper arm. Her hand, too, i think could use a little touching up -- her index fingers might be a bit long, while the palm/back of the hand itself is a bit short.

The areas that need work, in my opinion, though are really close -- just a quick stretch or tug here and there and I think this would move into the territory of being pretty amazing. But if we cropped it at the top of her tablet and focused on the upper half, it'd probably already be there; that part is just that good. (I love the details of her ear, too -- just little things that show a lot of effort).

Again, though -- great job on her eyes. You conveyed her sadness very well.

I hope this helped -- You really do beautiful work! 

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FluffyKyubey42 [2016-11-02 03:46:33 +0000 UTC]

I remember finding this animation, and you captured the feel of it perfectly! The highlights and the shading are especially excellent here. Great job!

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DSegno92 [2016-11-01 10:00:10 +0000 UTC]

This is so real, I'm starting crying myself, and I don't know why!

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Lestiehasnolife [2016-10-31 19:32:17 +0000 UTC]

This I should so detailed! I love it! The way her tears flow makes me want to jump into the picture as if I tried was real! You don't need to really change anything at all ^-^

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known-by-many-names [2016-10-31 18:46:51 +0000 UTC]

I loved this short sm!!! ;-; cried so hard. Here are a few places where you can improve this: 
Her eyes and eyebrows indicate that she's looking down, but her mouth and nose are placed (in respect to the chin) as if she's looking up. The final effect is an invisible 'split' by the center of her face. 
Her upper arm is far to muscular and the way it reflects light is strange because the rest of the lighting in this image is from the top right corner. For her lower arm and hand, the overdone shading makes it look sort like jelly. I would recommend adding some bonds at the back of the hand and incorporating more flesh tones to enhance the skin quality here. 
The pages in front of her also look a little too small, so I would suggest making them larger. 
Other than that, this is a really nice piece that portrays drama and color very, very well. I like it a lot

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Idleye [2016-10-31 10:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Here's a crit. 

I'll have to first say that something seems off with her face? Maybe it's the perspective. Can't really put my finger on it. But I'd like to say it may just be me but the nose just looks wrong. Without the nose protruding, like that of a normal face, the character seems non human - rather being humanoid. The harsh blending really doesn't work with the piece. If you're going for the anime aesthetic, I'd suggest you cel shade and blend in more subtle tones. The way you have it shaded now only cheapens the illustration. I'm not quite sure how to describe it but her shoulders are waaaaaay too up (?) and broad. It just makes it seem unnatural and non feminine. And the emphasis on deltoids and biceps just makes her look super muscular. I understand that it's your own rendition of Rin and it's cool if it was intentional to have the MC be muscular, but if it wasn't I would suggest thin-ing out the arms. The forearm should go down - so that you don't see it connect... The wrist bone is over emphasized and I would also like mention the 'doughy-ness' but it is already addressed. 

Looking at your shelter WIP, the other colored image looks a lot more interesting in terms of composition and color. 

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EnjeruWolf [2016-10-31 00:43:33 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful artwork! But why is the bottom so doughy looking? Just curious.

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SilverMuttt [2016-10-31 00:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Holy cow that's something special!

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