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Published: 2004-07-23 10:05:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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How have I arrived here?This place of off-tones, bitter freezing
And dried crimson.
The sky shaded to haziness
And the surroundings scarred with
Vicious abandon.
For what reason have I been lead astray?
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Comments: 6
This is a great piece. As I am still in highschool I can say that this poem really does a good job in relating to people. You did a great job in creating a piece that has some complex feelings, and yet they are easily felt. Not an easy thing to do, but a truely remarkable one.
Greg
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And this is back when I didn't think I could write. lol Yeah, I got some praise for a couple of the English teachers at my high school for this. Glad I found it again.
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So am I, it was a good read!
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This one just popped into my head years ago. Wrote itself, like most everything I have written has turned out. Just spur-of-the-moment ideas.
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