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Sharpie Marker and Acrylic Paint on 11 x 14 stretched canvas.From the "Haleigh N. Chapin" Collection, Fayetteville, N.C.
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Can anyone tell me what the hell "vision" means on a critique? This one should get 20/20 I guess haha. Anyways.
Very cool concept on this. The drawing itself is good but it lacks depth. You need to use shading and darker colours. I can see you kind of using highlights but they are all over the place, you need to have a light source in mind when shading and highlighting. Do some studies on light ^^ Right now it looks vivid and bright but too flat. Try looking at pictures of plants and see the texture they have and try and reproduce it.
I also think it would be more effective if it were zoomed out a bit. Where the flower cuts out on the left is kind of awkward since it's right before you can see the stem, so it kind of looks like a blimp with the back exploding instead of a flower hehe well in the thumbnail.
So, changing perspective so we could see the stem might help with that.
Conceptually this is really cool, like the title too.
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Thanks for the helpful suggestions. All your points are exactly what I'm looking into now.
White and highlights, at the moment, seem to be my nemesis.
Also, this was merely a doodle, as are most of my paintings/artworks.
There are many times I see the 'errors' and refuse to amend them. In fact, there are a few out in the world that, when I look at them, all I see are the flaws. But, I understand that making errors, and having others help point them out "in a helpful manner', is what makes us better artists, if we strive to do things differently next time.
Again, thank you so much for the insight!!!
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fantastic work and awsome painting dear very talented piece
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Thank you so much for taking so much time to look at my work and comment.
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Thanks, love. It's one of my favorites.
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in the vastness beyond
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I'm sure the deep sea squid think it goes on forever.
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Happy to hear that! Being that it's a doodle of a doodle, I agree, it came out fairly well.
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Actually, quite close to home.
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Whats the meaning of your piece?!
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Read the story "The Secret Life of Plants".
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cool! I'll check it out!
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Thank you very much. Glad to hear you like it.
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I like how bright the colors are....very 'eye' catching. lmao!
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Thanks! Yeah, this was a fun one. It only took a couple of days, and originated from a margin drawing in a spiral notebook. I'll post the doodle later in my scraps.
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I love how doodles can evolve into full on finished pieces and still turn out awesome without even trying. 
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Me, too. I think so of my best pieces have come from random mind spew.
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cool it look so realistic but the picture looks so weird oh well...well done anyway
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Weird is good stuff by me. Thanks for the view and comment.
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ur welcome thanks for saying thanks to me!!!!
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