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Anacybele — Vagabond's Lover: Melanie

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Published: 2016-10-09 03:34:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 776; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description Jerec: *reflecting upon how he and Melanie first met* I guess I was wrong. An angel did come for me after all.  

Hey, remember Jerec?  Mine and Falchion's guy from a number of my FE fanfics?  The son of Bryce?  This is his (eventual) wife!  I felt like drawing a portrait of her.

I figured a portrait fit because for one thing, since she's a common girl and doesn't fight, her dress is pretty generic.  We're not missing much below the waist here. lol And for another, it gave an opportunity to emphasize a pic of her with that fake smile there.  Why fake? Read. You might find out.

Prior to meeting Jerec, Melanie lived in the aptly named town of Rivertown, a major agricultural and farming community which, as the name implies, straddles both sides of the river Everfrost. Accustomed to seasonal flooding, and picking up the pieces afterwards, the people there have an infamous stubbornness which prohibits even thinking about giving up. However, as Melanie is uniquely aware, such people can also poor listeners.

At the point where she and Jerec meet, Melanie is engaged to Raphael, to whom she was betrothed practically from the cradle. Though Raphael and the parents are thrilled at the prospect, chance may see Jerec discover Melanie's true opinions on the matter.

Melanie is a quick witted girl, and a very fast learner. She also endeavors to see the best in people and, an anomaly amongst the redoubtable but stiff-necked people of Rivertown, extends that line of thinking to Daeins. This is made all the more startling since her three uncles and their families were executed by Ashnard because they had, for varying reasons, chosen to add their mercantile talents to a trade agreement King Ramon was finalizing with Gallia just before the Mad King's War began. Melanie also has a secretive side, since she knows much that would deeply upset her parents and neighbors, which she tries to avoid even when they do her a bad turn.

Melanie is also very fond of deer, often likening them to a "king of the forest". So long as she has a choice in the matter, she eschews eating venison and, in a truly jaw-dropping instance, got herself into quite a bit of trouble when he hewed to these principles far too much for her parents' tastes. How, you ask? You'll have to read it...and, even then, you might not believe it.

Melanie hasn't officially appeared in any of my fanfics yet, but she's about to.  Falchion and I are working on the next chapter of the story featuring her and Jerec as I post this.
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Falchion1984 [2016-11-08 03:05:31 +0000 UTC]

I've grown rather attached to this girl while rewriting that chapter-that-became-two-chapters of her story, and I can see why Jerec became so besotted. I really like the way you drew her face, especially those big pretty eyes and her fine cheekbones. The way you drew her hair is also very impressive. I just love the rich color, and the way you drew those ribbon tied tendrils over each shoulder was also great. Although simple, the background is pretty and, though modest, I think you drew her dress quite well. I was wondering, however, if the description ought to be updated since she's debuted? Relaying the story of her...ahem...dilemma might add substance to her for the viewer, perhaps even make her relatable to some. Well, we can discuss that later. For now, great work, and thank you as always for your patience.

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Anacybele In reply to Falchion1984 [2016-11-08 17:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Yayz, glad you like her, Falchion.

I suppose I could add a few more details, but not many, because I don't want to spoil the whole thing.

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Falchion1984 In reply to Anacybele [2016-11-09 02:08:39 +0000 UTC]

We could stick with what we've already revealed in the first two chapters. Namely that Melanie is a quick-learning woman who endeavors to see the best in people, that she's stuck in an unwanted betrothal, that she passionately refuses to eat anything that requires killing a deer, and that she has quite a bit more grit and gumption that her appearance might suggest. Well, those are the broad-strokes. Let me know if you want me to expand on those points, and only those points, in a note. And, thanks.

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Anacybele In reply to Falchion1984 [2016-11-09 04:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that sounds fine to me.  But you don't need to expand much, I'd say.

Btw, this election is getting crazy.

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Falchion1984 In reply to Anacybele [2016-11-09 04:48:47 +0000 UTC]

I myself cast my ballot and tried to avoid watching the circus. I myself had made up my mind some time ago, but the spectacle of it all is tiresome on a good day and chaps my hide on a bad day. If you have any anecdotes, please share them with somebody else. Also, I sent the note. I think there are more danglers than spoilers, but I'll let you make that call. Thanks much.

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Anacybele In reply to Falchion1984 [2016-11-09 06:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh don't worry, I wasn't going to give any because I want to avoid that too. And I didn't vote because I couldn't get registered in time (yeah, I never registered even though I could have years ago).

Anyway, I'll check out the note.

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Falchion1984 In reply to Anacybele [2016-11-09 06:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Coolness, and thanks.

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Anacybele In reply to Falchion1984 [2016-11-09 06:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Of course!  Are you interested in the Halloween pic I made?  It's the one showing Ike and Jerec in costumes and with a "Happy Halloween" banner behind them.

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Falchion1984 In reply to Anacybele [2016-11-10 02:21:21 +0000 UTC]

I'll get to it, thanks for the reminder.

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Anacybele In reply to Falchion1984 [2016-11-10 03:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Okey dokey!

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Falchion1984 In reply to Anacybele [2016-11-10 06:52:52 +0000 UTC]

How about that note with the new description? Did it pass inspection?

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Anacybele In reply to Falchion1984 [2016-11-10 17:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'd forgotten about that over the election. lol My bad. Yeah, it looks good to me!

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Falchion1984 In reply to Anacybele [2016-11-10 23:50:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much.

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ChattyPanda [2016-10-09 06:28:06 +0000 UTC]

She's a beauty!

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Anacybele In reply to ChattyPanda [2016-10-09 13:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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