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Published: 2016-04-27 02:44:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 454; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 2
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Alternitavely: A surefire way to waste a ton of black ink.This is my french EDM artist oc, Louis, he plays the electric violin and is only grey for effect.
(i'm well aware that his hand is too small)
A traditional redraw of a digital piece that I did in 2011: BrillanCe.
Prints and more available at society6.com/jadynmckay
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This is honestly absolutely beautiful! But it still needs some improvement of course
The overall composition is great (I could honestly draw something inspired off this... Hm... I'll credit ya!) I love the concept and all! But I have a problem in terms of trying to focus on the subject (idk if I worded that right kek)
So say, there are a bunch of ways to make your viewer REALLY focus on the subject (which is the dude in the middle). The colorful circles in the background draw the viewer away from the subject which is a problem because the colorful circles is an aspect that is very important in this piece. Perhaps what you could have done is make a thick outline around the character (Perhaps in black in areas where the circles touch) and that would separate the subject from the background. Or you could've improved the shading since the subject seems a little flat and blends a little with the background.
Speaking of shading! That's something this piece really needs to improve on! There's a lack of shadows and a HUGE lack of highlights. Perhaps that's the MAJOR factor you need to improve here.
That's all I have to say, everything else is good. This is (in fairness) a REALLY good piece but of course there's still room for improvement! Good luck!
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