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alyn β Heaven's Umbilical Cord
Published: 2004-03-01 07:47:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2877; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 1452
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2nd ever complete piece of abstract, why? cos i wanted to
trying to take some of the tips from my first into hand, a bit more explosive, yet a bit more loose. It's also a little spacey due to some of the fire techniques i've added and extremely subtle stars. But yeah, enjoy... i'm learning, gimme tips etc
(btw, i know this isn't what most of you watch me for, but i'm not quitting on space/terragen
)2hours in psCS
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Good job - but some comments:
It's a bit jaggy/pixely. You should have made it a bit smaller to eliminate that jaggy look, it's not too easy on the eye now. The brushwork and technical 2d are good - you can be proud of that. Good job, but keep this in mind.
Just a thought
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thanks for your constructive crits
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We're all worthy of building each other -'
that is the true meaning of art.
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This is really cool...it makes me think of DNA for some reason...
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interesting piece, keep trying and you'll certainly do great just like you are on your space/terragen pieces
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Too sharp in some places, but overall its nice. Good job.
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much better. ^_^ I love how it looks like it's wrapping itself around.. looks kinda like it's getting sucked in by the gravity of a black hole. ^_^
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i agree with the overdodged comment but i must say im not entirely sure where you multitalented right brain will stop...nice work alyn
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awesome work not nough of the render revealed i think but great work
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I think it's a little bit too jagged looking. Perhaps that was the look you were aiming for, but if you toned down the jaggedness or have varying areas of jaggedness, it would probably look better.
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I like this one a lot more
Anyway, good work, colours and brushing are very well done!
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I like this one a lot. Great work on trying new things, shows your a good artist.
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i like! good stuff! i like ur space stuff better tho.
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I love this one. It's better than your first abstact, in my opinion. ^^ I look forward to seeing more as always!
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some of the parts here look a bit toooo sharp. the overall composition works
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its not a bad piece, but compared to ur space stuff... nothing. its not a bad piece of art, but its just nothing special. still cool fire stuff though.
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you did a great job on this one
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cool to see something diffrent from you!
but this kind of brushing is not your best part
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that's pretty! looks amazing. great render and nice colors
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brushwork is a bit to contrastical (sry iΒ΄m german^^)
but itΒ΄s nice
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Honestly, I think you should stick to space art bro. 
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no problems dude i respect ya for the honest input
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Im sure you will get just as good as abstract as you are with your space/terragen stuff. So keep at it, and you will begin to impress me 
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at the moment i'm toying with some maths mechanics, but i should take a break later. I just made a pretty planet too
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Sounds great, can't wait to see it.
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Wow, that is really, really really cool. You are good with scenery and abtract! Where will the talent stop?
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I would 
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Nice going man!
Its very good to see you doing abstract now!
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I like this one quite a bit..and one of the kingdom cold's is my wallpaper ...
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really cool work man... but it still really bright... it should b more distibuted i like the colors very good job!
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love you're space art much more, but this is good 2 ...
great job
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i think your planets are much better, but this picture is great, too.
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