RasheruSuzie [2017-07-31 14:19:02 +0000 UTC]
Hello from !
I like the feel of this piece and the general rough look. The white highlights give it a nice glow, and it has a good amount of detail ^^
The wings are recognizable as such, which is good, but I think they could be refined a bit, perhaps to look more like butterfly wings? Just suggesting that because of the title lol. They are shaped a bit more like fly wings, whereas butterfly wings are a lot more rounded. You can look on google images to see what kinds of shapes could look cool. If you want to keep this shape, I’d just recommend adding more lines maybe something like on this photo media.istockphoto.com/photos/i…
The body proportions are very good, and the head doesn't actually feel too big to me; but the face is kind of uneven. If you flip the image (in MS Paint or any image software) it will become more apparent that her chin is very far on the right side. The bridge of the nose seems to continue into the forehead but it should curve into the eyebrow on the left, like such:
image.ibb.co/gSdHKk/fairy.png
Except for that, I actually don’t mind the camera flash you mention. Obviously I don’t know how the paper-original looks but I like the brightness and dark corners effect you have.
I think you’ve chosen good colors, and I really like the dark purple shadows on the skin. It gives the image a sadder mood, along with the deep blues of her outfit. Everything is nicely detailed so it keeps the eye interested. And the little white dots make it look shiny and magical! Nice work!
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leiki224 [2017-07-31 00:59:04 +0000 UTC]
This is Great!but perhaps i migth give you some consturctive critisisem,first,the arms look a Little deformed,to fix,you can use a reference,well no mare to say, hope it helps,bye
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