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matthewwwilson [2009-07-09 00:43:56 +0000 UTC]
oh, now this is nice!!
fantastic image.
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coconutjob [2009-03-19 16:42:39 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps if you're looking to develop more of a style to the actual image, you can try creating your own brush to use.There are lots of tutorials online if you don't know how to do it. I myself haven't created any unique brushes but doing so can allow a more calligraphic line (versus, a stark geometric line). To make using the brush tool most beneficial, I would recommend buying a decent tablet, as it provides a much more natural way of drawing. (if this is just like...a hobby or something, perhaps not such a wise investment :-P) In any case, I really like the line used here ( and the neo-punk vibe exuded), but I am curious how the image would look with a more organic brush-like line.
Overall, it's a great composition, though I feel that the colored shapes at the bottom are being used to fill the negative space. I would try making the message much bigger, it seems so insignificant in relation to the image. Also, the single strand of hair to the right, is incomplete, and feels slightly awkward since there are no other breaks in the image.
Again, great job rendering the image and also great color choice!
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AlternateRaiL In reply to coconutjob [2009-03-19 22:52:23 +0000 UTC]
You're pretty observant, cause that's exactly what the shapes of colour were added for, to fill the space. I got to that point and I was like crap, what am I going to do here? I'm surprised someone actually picked up on it. I must admit not much planning goes into the stuff I make most of the time. Generally it starts with a rough idea, and this one ended up going through a bunch of iterations before it reached this one, but it was mostly me grasping at straws.
It was the first piece I've ever done using illustrator extensively, and I did give some other brushes a try, but because of the relatively representative nature of the drawing It didn't really work out. I always thought calligraphic brushes looked better on more simplified and stylised drawings myself.
I have decided to get around to buying a tablet as soon as possible, but at the moment I'm saving for a new computer, as my last adobe CS capable computer recently died.
Thanks for taking the time to leave a meaningful comment, it's much appreciated.
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coconutjob In reply to AlternateRaiL [2009-03-19 23:02:40 +0000 UTC]
yup, no problem! You do have a great style going into alot of your work!
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borowz [2009-02-18 10:49:54 +0000 UTC]
that's cool, love it!
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AlternateRaiL In reply to borowz [2009-02-18 10:53:12 +0000 UTC]
Cheers. I'm a fan of this one but not many people seem to like it.
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nytterai [2008-12-20 05:58:36 +0000 UTC]
OMG. I just love it.
Love the vibe.
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AlternateRaiL In reply to nytterai [2008-12-20 06:05:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks heaps! I like this one too, but it's not as popular as some of my other stuff.
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nytterai In reply to AlternateRaiL [2008-12-20 16:30:23 +0000 UTC]
Should be...everything is just really awesome.
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AlternateRaiL In reply to jhasson [2008-12-17 16:44:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah i'm thinking of using that as my signature in all my pieces now. It's really simple but I guess it works well. Yeah I'm really a fan of just lines, like with this one and the daft punk one. Thanks for the comment!
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giodim [2008-12-14 20:35:09 +0000 UTC]
wow.that's perfect!
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AlternateRaiL In reply to giodim [2008-12-14 21:06:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I dunno feels like there's too much empty space, but other than that I am very happy with it.
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giodim In reply to AlternateRaiL [2008-12-14 21:19:35 +0000 UTC]
it's just the way it should be.it's awsome.
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spystyle [2008-12-14 16:58:33 +0000 UTC]
looks great mate
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abstrasctik [2008-12-13 20:06:37 +0000 UTC]
hey ALT great work man
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AlternateRaiL In reply to abstrasctik [2008-12-14 06:37:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks man, means a lot coming from you! You seem to know what you're doing with vector people, any pointers?
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abstrasctik In reply to AlternateRaiL [2008-12-14 07:06:36 +0000 UTC]
the only thing i can tell you its practice its the only way to improve your skills!
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Zachary-S-K [2008-12-13 09:44:35 +0000 UTC]
man i think this turned out great
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hekvl [2008-12-13 00:36:43 +0000 UTC]
Cool man!
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kuzzeyesedsoe [2008-12-12 22:45:34 +0000 UTC]
Dude, nicely done. I wanna get into vectoring people, but I've been too scared. Kudos, fantastic first run.
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AlternateRaiL In reply to kuzzeyesedsoe [2008-12-13 04:28:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeah It's pretty daunting at first. I think I actually went about it the completely wrong way. Haha I dunno I definitely will try this again though. I was actually pretty fun to make.
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kuzzeyesedsoe In reply to AlternateRaiL [2008-12-13 17:11:47 +0000 UTC]
I'll have to work up the nerve to attempt one of these bad boys soon.
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vaitomarnokoo [2008-12-12 22:24:51 +0000 UTC]
oh, great mode in this one. Like the collors you choose and the vector, and, sure, I loved it.
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AlternateRaiL In reply to jenny-fur-tography [2008-12-13 04:29:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm actually surprised that it didn't turn out completely horrible. Glad you like it.
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