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Published: 2012-11-24 13:05:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 835; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 21
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Apple Fritter this time! You can expect more of these drawings to come as I feel that they are both good for training my speed and most importantly, shading.I don't know about you guys, but I'm pretty happy with this one. Thanks to Pirill for pointing out that the shading on the coat was pretty green.
What do you guys think?
(Apple Fritter best background pony)
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A bit of constructive feedback. You may want to look into making the far eye (her right eye) narrower and less high, so the perspective makes sense again. Right now, her right eye seems to be too big, at least for me.
See visual critique -> [link]
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The eye do seem very high, but in the show the eye is pretty much the same height, just thinner. I'll have to look into this.
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Well, I'm not an authority on the subject of drawing ponies, but the far eyes in the show and in the same perspective seem narrower than you drew them. The show sometimes throws perspective out of the window and replaces them with their own rules. This gives a more stylized look and feel to the illustration than if you'd use natural perspective. It creates interest, because it looks so different, yet still pleasing to the eye.
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I'll keep that in mind for next time. Thanks.
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Nice... i especially like the detailing on the background!
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The background took me 24 days and nights to produce. I glad you like it! ^^
GREEEEEEEEEEEEEN!
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