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Fishfoo [2013-09-20 21:53:03 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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McFlyky [2012-03-07 03:23:15 +0000 UTC]
it almost looks like a face that is turning into sand and melting away in the darkness. nice!
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Neophantasma [2012-03-06 00:49:09 +0000 UTC]
I'd like to see what poem you have for this.
It's unpleasant in a beautiful way. I'm getting struggle and suffer from this, like the person is having a nightmare. Not sure if you were going for that, but I definitely like it.
It's just the lines that make it chaotic even though the person's sound asleep, IMO.
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