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Alexandru1988 — Fragile Dreams
Published: 2012-11-09 13:19:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2311; Favourites: 260; Downloads: 276
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Rules about using my work#1 Please note me if you want to use my work.
#2 My photos are not for stealing. Please respect me and my work.
#3 After using my work, the new deviation will have to link back the original.
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A fragile wreck on a storm of emotion.----------------------------------------------------
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Comments: 13
Note - After reading over my critique it sounds overly harsh, I would like to point out that I DO like this image, and have even taken similar ones myself at times, however as a piece of artwork, it does lack a certain je ne sais quoi.
Vision - "A fragile wreck on a storm of emotion." I can see what you are thinking of with this image, but as the needles and the drops are the prominent features, that it doesn't quite match your statement.
Originality - Not a very original subject, and interesting one, but there doesn't seem to be anything in this image that hasn't been done before.
Technique - The depth of field (DOF) is only just apparent in this image in a very few places, it would have been nicer if the DOF was a little further into the image to focus on the webs a little better.
Also, I was taught by another DA member that a photograph should be framed regardless of whether it is printed or on the internet to show the viewer that it is finished. It can be anything from a simple 1 pixel white border to a complicated three coloured border.
Impact - This is a lovely image, but I feel like it is a little oversaturated which makes it blend, not have a great impact.
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