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Description Byorak is my favorite MOC and my longest project on which I'm still working.

I CAN'T say much about Byorak, because there's too much to talk about.

Byorak is a Dark Hunter, who desires to find the rarest materials in order to create strong weapons. He's a pure blooded blacksmith, who creates weapons only for himself, but sometimes gives them away to the ones he considers to be more fit for a weapon than himself.


Here's the gallery of Byoraks history:
Byorak 1.0
Byorak 2.0
Byorak 2.2
Byorak 3.0
Byorak 3.2

For any additional picture, here's the whole gallery: [link]
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Comments: 41

Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-08-06 11:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Byorak was the first ever MOC I had seen from Alex. I remember that I wasn't expecting much when he first asked me to take a look, but I was pleasantly surprised when I clicked on the link and the page loaded.

Byorak has come a long ways. Alex followed some advice from me I believe, and that was to keep working on the designs and improve. And in doing so Byorak has grown, literally in size and figuratively.

Vision gets a full e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/> because I think Alex has either completely or just about completely get this MOC where he wants it. If not then maybe a e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Half Star"/> reduction might be needed. But I think the uncompleted vision is so minute that its not.

Originality gets a e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="No Star"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="No Star"/> because the way Alex has used the parts and the over all concept of Byorak is very typical. Most everything used on byorak makes sense to be used that way, the serpent head as a gauntlet, or other various animal parts on him. Though Byorak isn't completely without innovative parts use. The Takanuva masks on the upper chest is unusual and not seen used this way but then again, most MOCs aren't big enough to allow for that. The Eehlek head as a crotch piece is a bit unusual, but it works. I personally wouldn't call that much attention to my MOC's crotch, making it look like he's wearing skimpy underwear, but it does work, I'll admit.
Conceptually, Byorak is a Dark Hunter, a type of character established in the bionicle lore. So nothing all that unique there. I often root my MOCs in bionicle lore as well. But Originality isn't everything in my book, so I find it to not be a big deal.

Technique is no surprise here. a full e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Stare"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Stare"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Stare"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Stare"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Stare"/> as usual. Byorak displays Alex's most fluent and well thought out use of armoring and parts layering. He's gotten the parts so compactly in there that I almost wonder if any of the pieces are flexed or bent to stay in their place. I believe the term for this is "fudging it." But I'd have to ask alex if that's the case.
The color scheme has been greatly improved over the different versions, now the dark green is isolated to Byorak's limbs and head, black on the inner side of his arms and silver filling in the rest.

Impact gets a full e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/> I simply think this is one of the best pure bionicle MOCs that I've ever seen. This is the MOC that singlehandedly commanded a lot of respect from me towards Alex and earned him a place as my favorite Deviantart MOCer(possibly tied with *Rahiden

Alex has put a lot of effort into Byorak, upgrading him, acquiring just the right parts or the parts in the right color to make this MOC exactly what he want it to be. Its paid off. This is still his best MOC to date in my opinion.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-08-06 12:35:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm totally satisfied with this critique xD
It pretty much points out all important facts about Byoraks history as MOC since the time he came to dA. It's very nice of you to have done this for me, thank you very much
And thanks for the five you gave me on technique. xD
I don't know if it was a mistake or an intended joke, but it's just too good, so we're gonna leave it like this

I totally go along with your critique, I myself would have given Byorak for originality. It wasn't ever my goal to make something innovative with him. I just wanted to create a pure blooded bionicle MOC

Is there any specific MOC you'd like me to write a critique for?

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-08-06 15:41:02 +0000 UTC]

Good, I'm glad...Now go critique some of my lesser loved by the critique MOCs.

FUCK I didn't notice that. Oops. Yes I gave you five stares for technique. It was a mistake. Though I noticed I did "stare" earlier and fixed it, but I guess I didn't get em all. I thought about doing them all as Stares to be funny. I should have done it.

That's exactly what Byorak is, a full-blooded bionicle MOC. And that's what his brother, Ryakk will always be.

Well I made a journal with five MOCs that haven't exactly gotten much love with critiques. But if I had to get just one from you, I'm leaning towards Matteo. Kuro critiqued him but as my self MOC I feel like he should get a little more attention. Go take a look at that journal and see if you'd like to do one or more of those. And hey, its not like mine are going away after today.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-08-06 18:09:56 +0000 UTC]

That's true. You have some time, because I still have some work to finish ...

YAY, Byorak and Ryakk are brothers!
It's somehow an amazing thing to hear from you xD

But okay, I'm gonna take look on that journal ^^

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-08-06 18:15:33 +0000 UTC]

Okie dokie. Well better get that done.

Didn't we talk about this? I was wanting to connect their back stories. Since Ryakk and Byorak have similar features, as well as their names being similar, I figured it'd be fitting that they be related.

Cool.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-08-07 07:31:38 +0000 UTC]

You can do that ^^
I don't have too many plans for Byoraks backstory. If yo ever write something about Ryakk, you can include Byorak if you'd like. But I'd really like to find a way to show that they're related

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Nyanic [2014-06-18 02:10:22 +0000 UTC]

2 things

1: He looks like a green Avalanche (you remember rahiden right?)
2: Why is his crotch glow-in-the-dark?

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Nyanic [2014-06-22 19:42:51 +0000 UTC]

1: Well, they have similar body structures.
2: This parts doesn't glow in the dark, but I get your point, it was corrected in a later version: alex-darkrai.deviantart.com/ar…

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bioghosty4 [2013-06-25 19:22:14 +0000 UTC]

aweeesome

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skull123246 [2012-11-25 00:28:59 +0000 UTC]

My guy is bigger, but yours is cooler!

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R603 [2012-08-16 01:38:06 +0000 UTC]

If I were able to write a critique about how awesome this moc is, I would. I love how well the armor fits together, and how fully custom it is! If I were to go in detail about everything this would be a super long comment! Well done, you've earned yourself a llama!!! 0w0

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to R603 [2012-08-16 01:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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BossHollowless [2012-07-13 18:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to BossHollowless [2012-07-13 20:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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BossHollowless In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-07-13 20:53:03 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-05-28 06:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Your bio for him reminded me. I think a certain warrior of mine that he might find worth needs a weapon, cause he's just using secondary weapons. I've needed to design a new weapon for this warrior, but I'm not nearly as good at it as you are. Maybe Byorak could help.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-05-28 06:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Are you talking about Ryakk? xD
Or didn't you want to give Mototaur an axe once?

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-05-28 07:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Mototaur has his flail. He's good. So yes. I am.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-05-28 07:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Cool, what kind of weapon should it be?

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-05-28 16:47:37 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...dunno. Something I could replicate obviously, less you feel like sending me parts. haha. So not too much greebling/system lego fanciness. But as for what kind of weapon, I dunno, what do you think would suit Ryakk?

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-05-28 16:55:27 +0000 UTC]

My first impression when seeing him was always 'spear' or 'lance'
He's not the sword, axe or hammer type in my opinion. Are guns an option, anyways?

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-05-28 17:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm well he had that drill axe thingy, which worked, but it was too flimsy for him. It wobbled and bent too much, so I did away with it. Since then he hasn't really had a weapon. I think a spear or lance would be kind of neat yeah. As for guns...You know, I don't really know. None of those guys have guns. I've always seen Ryakk as more of the hand to hand combat kind of fighter.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-05-28 18:48:51 +0000 UTC]

My idea as well, I just wanted to ask for your opinion.
Anyways, did you get my message with the link for the picture of Zero?
Also, could you take a picture of all the parts you could use for that weapon? A pile picture like this [link] is enough for me to get an idea of what you have to spare. But I still may come back at you when it come to the amounts of certain technic pieces.

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-05-28 20:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Yes I got that. I thought I replied. I'm sorry.

Okay. I've taken those pictures. [link] this is a rough idea of what I've got to work with. I would say to avoid using ++ pieces as I don't have many of those. You can kinda see what weapon pieces I've got...I think. Maybe as you design something, send me progress pictures and I can let you know if I have those parts or the quantity used?

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2012-05-28 22:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Of course, but remember, I'm only able to work on the weekends. Next weekend I'm gonna spend sometime with a friend, he starts MOCng now and wants some help
But I'm gonna try to make a prototype of the weapon if I can ^^

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-05-28 23:55:20 +0000 UTC]

That's fine. Ryakk isn't going anywhere. And its not like I'm in a hurry to give him a weapon. I want your take on a weapon for him because you build weapons so well.

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SkrallRazor [2012-05-21 00:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Cool but it's a bit weird that the light green is on the crotch, that's the first thing I see on the moc itself 0_0

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to SkrallRazor [2012-05-21 06:47:37 +0000 UTC]

I think it's funny xD

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SkrallRazor In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-05-22 01:22:56 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Rahiden [2012-05-20 21:33:24 +0000 UTC]

I really do envy your skill in armour layering, you know While I can't say it's as smooth as Kiukari's, it's still very impressive, especially when considering Byorak's immense size...

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Rahiden [2012-05-20 22:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the size gave me a hard time. Armoring something big is huge load of work.
I better at working on titan size. Colossus is not my favorite.

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HaroldPotter [2012-05-20 21:32:37 +0000 UTC]

Holy carp, that's big.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to HaroldPotter [2012-05-20 22:00:45 +0000 UTC]

I know

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sniperray213 [2012-05-20 21:21:47 +0000 UTC]

impressive body buildup

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to sniperray213 [2012-05-20 22:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it took quite some time xD

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sniperray213 In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-05-20 22:06:10 +0000 UTC]

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Shorjok [2012-05-20 21:19:04 +0000 UTC]

I love Byorak so much. It's utter brillinace how all the parts fit together so neatly. He looks great, I can't praise this MOC enough.

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Alex-Darkrai In reply to Shorjok [2012-05-20 22:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, thanks

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Shorjok In reply to Alex-Darkrai [2012-05-20 22:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Not at all

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OBLIQUE123 In reply to Shorjok [2013-06-09 02:22:49 +0000 UTC]

I Dont want to offend any of you but i hope none of you are over 15 cos these are toys, If you want to be genuinely creative and original, Go learn 3D modelling or somthing similar. This is just toys and yet it is cool how you guys mix and match peices to get what you want. But unless your designing and building the parts your self its just a toy and your just playing with a toy.

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Shorjok In reply to OBLIQUE123 [2013-06-09 12:39:44 +0000 UTC]

You've got to be kidding me.
Firstly, it's 'you're'.
Secondly, how dare you accuse us of not being 'genuinely creative'. MOCing is an art form. There's even a category in deviantart for it.

I could go on but I will allow others to do so. I've had enough of dealing with people like you.

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