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I create this character to take a break from studiing
Β© Copyright by AleΕ‘ Kotnik 2009. All rights reserved. You may not use my work without my written permission.
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I think this is a good start. I agree with some of the other critiques that the anatomy could be stronger. That will come with practice. But the lighting seems to be a very good start. I like that you kept simplicity of light sources. The purple electric glow is nice. I think the key light could be stronger on the character's face to provide a stronger focal point of the composition, and it would allow you to have a good source for interesting bounced light off of her shoulders. I hope this makes sense. Keep creating!
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Yeah.. i'll have to work on anatomy a lot. Lighting also isn't so good.
Thanks for critique man!
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Hi Ales! good job mate, really. As AlexTooth said before there are some anatomical issues, and the body needs more depth, cause specially the upper torso should be more rounded. But for the colours and the composition this is a very good quality work. The wings, as you made them, are very well rendered, love how the ligt falls on them in the high side. Even the volume of the wings is good. so what ese canI say? good job mate! Happy to have seen a work from u
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Another Daggeeeeeeeer's critic!
Thanks mate! Yeah.. unfortunately i spend a lot time on rendering and not so much on anatomy. Since this is foreshorten perspective i should really focus on anatomy and proportions more.
I'll make more carefull sketch for next illustration before i'll render it. I promise
Thanks again
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ehhe I see exactly what u mean mate, I do that many times too, infact always I have to force myself working more on the sketch, and lot of times I forget, than I find myself in trouble while rendering..
however cool to see a personal work of u
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Totalno hudo, ful dobra perspektiva, odliΔno narjena krila.
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Hey Ales, I think this looks really cool! Composition, wings etc, are all working well. Only issues I have is the perspective on the body and some anatomy. I feel the upper torso is a big rigid, being a female this should be more curved. I also think you should show the illiac crest on the pelvis, at least hint it's there. I think the curve of the shoulders and arms is, well too rounded - you might want to hint where the shoulder connect to the upper arms more. I think the ribcage could be defined more, especially on the edges of the body.
Good job so far, I think it's a really powerful piece!
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Thanks for critic mate!
Yeah... there is a lot of anatomy issues so i'll have to study it moaaaaaaaaar
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