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Felzm [2009-03-09 03:38:51 +0000 UTC]
Really the idea of a girl fearless as if she would taming the storm is great, as a alegory about the Hope or the Faith. like your poem. I owe you to read the tale of your grandphater, it was a bit large to I can read here, I copy it for read it whit time. I will repli you about it.
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Felzm In reply to alanat [2009-03-09 15:20:30 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome as always. Well, on a fact to post it by parts was a good idea, but my trouble is on the vocabulary, but I´ll read it slowly on home.
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alanat In reply to Felzm [2009-03-23 14:46:27 +0000 UTC]
That's the problem with poetry. sometimes when you write it you use lots and lots of vocab, and it can make it quite difficult to understand. well hopefulyl i'll get to post some of my newer poems, which i think are wuite easier !
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Felzm In reply to alanat [2009-03-23 17:42:02 +0000 UTC]
I am so sorry. I owe you some readings to your written works. I think you did those new poems better. The important thing is you want to show to the world the strongness of your feelings and emotions.
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alanat In reply to Felzm [2009-04-06 14:42:00 +0000 UTC]
Ha, and now I have a bunch of super long poems out >.< I try to show emotion in them, but whenever I do that they end up being wayyy to long
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Felzm In reply to alanat [2009-04-06 19:22:42 +0000 UTC]
Your poems have all your feelings and emotions, that is the important thing, and if you have many thing to say to the world, then do it. I will be glad to read them.
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alanat In reply to Felzm [2009-04-26 17:04:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, mayhaps I will consider to post a couple more of them. . .
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Felzm In reply to alanat [2009-04-26 17:24:11 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome. I will read then, I hope to see them soon here.
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