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Published: 2009-03-08 16:53:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description Rain
You can smell the wetness in the air,
A warning from above, telling you it’s time to prepare.
Then the sky ripples and fades into a haunting gray
A sign that Mother Nature is in dismay.
The sky bubbles and starts to overflow,
Just as the wind whips in and begins to blow.
First it’s just the simple drips falling from the sky,
But soon enough the shower’s here, not letting a moment pass it by.
White lightning flashes and illuminates the gloomy air,
Making young children and watchers shudder in despair.
The world seems to tremble and almost tear in two,
So caught in confusion and uncertainty, that it doesn’t know what to do.
Trees are flustered, flowers cringe,
Doors moan and threaten to snap off their hinge.
But in the midst of it all,
One creature comes out, looking small.
Her locks of golden hair have been ruined by this vicious gale,
Giving the impression that she’s oh so weak and frail.
She turns her head up to face the ferocity of this raging thing above,
Her face not showing an emotion of panic, something more like love.
Her eyes close and hands rise to embrace the fury that nature cannot suppress,
Calmness and tranquility replace the once growing feeling of distress.
The wind dies down while clouds fade white,
The sun peaks through the storm, still shining bright.
Awestruck people join her under remains of the roaring rain,
Letting it wash over themselves, erasing all feelings of hate and pain.
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Comments: 11

Felzm [2009-03-09 03:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Really the idea of a girl fearless as if she would taming the storm is great, as a alegory about the Hope or the Faith. like your poem. I owe you to read the tale of your grandphater, it was a bit large to I can read here, I copy it for read it whit time. I will repli you about it.

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alanat In reply to Felzm [2009-03-09 14:52:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks yes, it was extremely long, 5 pages when I had originally written it. I was going to post it in smaller parts, although it didn't make much sense that way. I hope it's not too long >.<

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Felzm In reply to alanat [2009-03-09 15:20:30 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome as always. Well, on a fact to post it by parts was a good idea, but my trouble is on the vocabulary, but I´ll read it slowly on home.

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alanat In reply to Felzm [2009-03-23 14:46:27 +0000 UTC]

That's the problem with poetry. sometimes when you write it you use lots and lots of vocab, and it can make it quite difficult to understand. well hopefulyl i'll get to post some of my newer poems, which i think are wuite easier !

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Felzm In reply to alanat [2009-03-23 17:42:02 +0000 UTC]

I am so sorry. I owe you some readings to your written works. I think you did those new poems better. The important thing is you want to show to the world the strongness of your feelings and emotions.

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alanat In reply to Felzm [2009-04-06 14:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Ha, and now I have a bunch of super long poems out >.< I try to show emotion in them, but whenever I do that they end up being wayyy to long

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Felzm In reply to alanat [2009-04-06 19:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Your poems have all your feelings and emotions, that is the important thing, and if you have many thing to say to the world, then do it. I will be glad to read them.

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alanat In reply to Felzm [2009-04-26 17:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, mayhaps I will consider to post a couple more of them. . .

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Felzm In reply to alanat [2009-04-26 17:24:11 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome. I will read then, I hope to see them soon here.

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Mirai-Mika [2009-03-08 21:41:39 +0000 UTC]

ooo so she made everyone happy again ^^ or maybe she managed to stop a symbolistic war or something

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alanat In reply to Mirai-Mika [2009-03-09 14:53:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha either way works She was just the girly who wasn't scared of a little rainfall

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