Comments: 41
hermartian [2013-08-03 05:37:42 +0000 UTC]
The wet drops on my lashes
Like tears of the sky
In my eyes.
The sadness of the world
Falling to touch me
I stare down the cloud
Big gray sky
It makes me whole
It sees my pain
And lets me live
I feel the evaporated tears of every creature
Then I know the whole big world...
Its one.
I belong to it. I am invincible.
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akrathan In reply to hermartian [2013-08-05 16:00:48 +0000 UTC]
That's beautiful! So many wonderful poems about rain...
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gazmanica [2013-07-29 11:44:08 +0000 UTC]
Awash With Feeling
'
There are so many poems about rain
And they are all true
Open up your heart
And swim in the new
Open up arch back
And accept heavens grace
Tonight we dine
On nothing
That is old
That is new
Love's potion
Dribbles down over
Drowning sorrow
Baptising deep hurt
Little paper sail boats
From rivulets
To streams
To waterways'
To rivers
Go out to sea
'
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akrathan In reply to gazmanica [2013-07-31 13:54:30 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful! Reminds me of Brautigan - The Return of the Rivers:
All the rivers run into the sea;
yet the sea is not full;
unto the place from whence the rivers come,
thither they return again.
It is raining today
in the mountains.
It is a warm green rain
with love
in its pockets
for spring is here,
and does not dream
of death.
Birds happen music
like clocks ticking heavens
in a land
where children love spiders,
and let them sleep
in their hair.
A slow rain sizzles
on the river
like a pan
full of frying flowers,
and with each drop
of rain
the ocean
begins again.
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TobyJo [2013-07-09 21:31:15 +0000 UTC]
powerful dramatic hypnotic splendiferous in every aspect
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eljunchi22 [2013-03-14 23:24:59 +0000 UTC]
amazing... i just love your work!! congrats
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icarosteel [2013-02-22 06:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this piece is amazing!
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KimHeiseArt [2013-02-21 21:11:25 +0000 UTC]
beautiful! I love the composition
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Mayeaux [2013-02-18 00:29:24 +0000 UTC]
Superb!
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Mayeaux In reply to akrathan [2013-02-25 02:23:50 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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J-Hump [2013-02-15 17:17:16 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely love it .
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J-Hump In reply to akrathan [2013-02-16 21:56:46 +0000 UTC]
Welcome
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f1utterby3 [2013-02-12 16:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. I love how washed out this looks and the combination of earthy colors here!
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blanket86 [2013-02-12 10:27:05 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful! Very nice details and composition!
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akrathan In reply to blanket86 [2013-02-12 15:55:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much!
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akrathan In reply to soarts [2013-02-12 15:54:36 +0000 UTC]
You may find at art stores but I got it from artresin.com. Good luck!
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oodajunkie [2013-02-12 02:43:13 +0000 UTC]
I like the tonality of your painting.
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