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Published: 2015-10-14 02:54:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 4772; Favourites: 68; Downloads: 0
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I wish for pain and fire,For shattered heart,
And lonesome desire.
I long for tears that fall in streams,
For bruised soul,
And crushed dreams.
I beg for wounds and aches,
For damaged mind,
And tough breaks.
All this to remind me,
To prove, that yes,
I have a heart that shakes.
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So you wish to feel human? You want to prove you have a soul, have emotions and feelings? Or am I wrong?
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Something along those lines. Sometimes, I just wanna feel heartbreak.Β
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To let you know that your still alive..?Β
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Not really. I know i'm alive. I just want to prove to myself that I can feel that. 'That I'm not heartless.Β
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Lol. Yes, yes they are.Β
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Good poem though.
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Sometimes the most beautiful things are the saddest.Β
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true. Wise words
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Thank you.Β
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this is, like always, very well done!
sometimes I feel the same.
I wonder if I'm to detached from my own feelings and situations.
but then again, being detached is what's stopping me from feeling too terrible...
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Thank you!!
Yeah. It's hard to want to feel, yet fear it too.Β
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You are an amazing person who deserves nothing but the finest. And I know you dont want the best or finest or anything fancy but you deserve it. x3Β
You dont deserve to feel bad at all, my friend. And thats one of the things Im around for. I promise I will try and always be here to help you up when you feel down, to listen if you want to vent,...a friend to turn to and make you laugh and chuckle. Thats just who I am, and I intend to keep it up~!
PS, never forget to smile, you are amazing in mind and in person~~~ ^^Β
Nicely worded as per usual, tho as your friend,I wish naught for you to feel upset in such a regard~~Β
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Thanks. XDD.Β
I know, I know. Thanks hon.Β
XDD
YAYYYYYY. And yeah. I'm not really upset tho.Β
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xD Well still, if you is, I shall be there ;3;
Glad you arent upset tho, you deserve to be content and happy...and to have Ham steak xD
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^^ I know.Β
Lol. Thanks.Β
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Call it free verse if you like, it's what you say it is.
This is... good.
P.S. - the "..." is just because I feel like I have a lot more to say about this piece but I can't put it into words. This really is very good IMO. I just dunno what else really to say.
Good work, Ms. Nakamura.
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Yeah, let's go with that.Β
Lol. I see. Okay. XD. That's fine. The comments don't need to be poetry.Β
Thank you.Β
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welcome.
May not need to be poetry, but I DO usually pride myself on the illusion of eloquence. I like to be able to at least pretend that I'm remarkably well-spoken, lol.
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Lol. Well you are. Usually. When you have caffeine.Β
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*sips caffeine* Idk why you make it sound like I live off of caffeine I mean *chugs coffee* it's not like *drinks cola* I can't go a day *refills coffee mug* without it or anything
Lol XD
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I don't know if your capable of going without caffeine lol.Β
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