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akamiix3 In reply to MrTristanOne [2012-02-27 10:05:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks im working on chapter 2 now, maybe u can read it and critique it for me?, i kinda wanna make sure its interesting

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MrTristanOne In reply to akamiix3 [2012-02-27 10:23:47 +0000 UTC]

i don't really like critiqing but i will read it though!

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akamiix3 In reply to MrTristanOne [2012-02-27 10:27:38 +0000 UTC]

oh cool,make sure to comment on you fav pages, oh the grammar during the first couple of pages werent on purpose at first this project was just for me then people started reading it so i got on point with the grammar

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