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ailleurs β€” a sorrowful zephyr

Published: 2006-04-06 04:10:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Whispering against your ear, a broken hearted soul
Tells you what she says and the sorrow her heart holds.
Let her caress your hair;
That gentle zephyr through the air,
Granting you peace of mind…
And giving her some also in kind.
Let the breeze play over your skin
Over your bare shoulders neck and chin.
It whispers away until the next time when
It has saddened and needs to return again.
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eoosen [2006-04-06 14:03:56 +0000 UTC]

umm, you kinda stole my image...

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ailleurs In reply to eoosen [2006-04-06 14:40:24 +0000 UTC]

I replaced it with another photo. I'm sorry I used the last one, I thought that I could since you told me that you weren't going to submit the original...only a photoshopped copy. I guess I'm in the wrong here, but now I've changed the display.

Oh, and for future notice, if you'd like to comment on my poems I'd be really happy about it but please actually comment on the style, flow, alliteration, etc. and not about the photograph I used....the photo isn't really important since it's a poem that I'm submitting anyhow. And I promise to only use photos that I have taken from now on.

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