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ImperialxViciousness [2011-07-30 21:20:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm not a premium member, so i apologize for the impromptu critique...minor critique
As always, I just love the coloring style that you have; no problems there.
The one thing that stands out to me is 'Zula's nose. It should be a bit lower, instead of near between the eyes.
Also (I'm not attempting to be a critic bitch), the neck and shoulders could be a bit more scaled correctly. As in, the shoulders not so broad or the neck not so long
Other than that, it's wonderful.
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agent-ayu In reply to ImperialxViciousness [2011-07-30 21:55:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, these were one of the earlier drawings before I understood the shoulders and neck proportions.
I actually didn't notice about the nose until you mentioned it. I'll keep those in mind for my other drawings.
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ImperialxViciousness In reply to agent-ayu [2011-07-30 21:59:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure you knew that i meant no harm. I had a moment where i didn't think and didn't consider that this was possibly an older drawing. My apologies.
Glad to be of some assisstance
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agent-ayu In reply to ImperialxViciousness [2011-07-30 22:02:03 +0000 UTC]
No, it's alright. All critiques on any drawing will help remind me of what to pay attention to with my new drawings as well.
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ImperialxViciousness In reply to agent-ayu [2011-07-30 22:16:47 +0000 UTC]
Love your attitude. As an artists, that is what's really important, amirite?
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fionii [2010-11-09 21:33:27 +0000 UTC]
So... when are you posting chapter 14? ^^'
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agent-ayu In reply to fionii [2010-11-09 22:26:14 +0000 UTC]
Sometime this week.
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fionii In reply to agent-ayu [2010-11-10 20:48:06 +0000 UTC]
HELL YES!
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Thoralmir [2010-11-03 22:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Huh, I thought that it would be chapter 15...
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agent-ayu In reply to Thoralmir [2010-11-04 01:53:57 +0000 UTC]
Technically it is if you count the Prologue as chapter 1. If you don't count the prologue as chapter 1 it is chapter 14.
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