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#fantasy #forest #oc #rpg #trees #maylovesakidah
Published: 2015-02-19 16:23:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2458; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 6
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commission for , thank you so much
I enjoy drawing the forest yet still feel that the characters don't blend too well orz
anyway, my commission is still open
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Overall this is a wonderful piece. My only suggestions are to work on the usual (you're doing great this is just a suggestion because it's always great to evolve as an artist!). And by the usual I mean like proportions, anatomy, depth, the basics. Your expressions and poses are great, and the anatomy is very good, maybe the tiniest bit stiff. Hands are always one of the most difficult parts of drawing humans and I suggest you practice using photo references, it helps immensely. The lighting and colors are just gorgeous (I especially love the muted palette of your forest). The characters blend pretty well into your background, they don't look disconnected from it. The only thing that caught my eye was the girl in blue's right foot on the stub of the tree. If you add a little more depth and space to the stump that would fix that floating look. I hope this helps, it was a pleasure critiquing your lovely piece!
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X3 Awwwwwww i love it thank you very much~!!!
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