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Onivale [2010-03-10 05:10:46 +0000 UTC]
The face and chest look fantastic!
In comparison to the tail and the chest, there is not much detail. There could be a little bit more in the legs and the hips to keep everything consistant, but that could also be a stylistic choice. I dunno, I'm terrible at critique o.o
I love the fur, very lovely. She has a very slender physique.
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AeiriMuse In reply to Onivale [2010-03-10 21:15:28 +0000 UTC]
No, you have a wonderful point, however, at the same time, too much detail in the legs would make them look more rigid and imply longer fur. I believe her character is mainly short fur except for the mane and poofy tail. I could be wrong though.
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Onivale In reply to AeiriMuse [2010-03-10 21:25:31 +0000 UTC]
There are certainly ways to draw detail in legs without seeming as if it has long fur. :]
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AeiriMuse In reply to Onivale [2010-03-10 21:42:19 +0000 UTC]
Not that I could come up with without color for this one.If I had done shadingβmaybe.
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Onivale In reply to AeiriMuse [2010-03-10 23:18:34 +0000 UTC]
Not necessarily. It all comes to line definition. Even in nature, some "lines" will appear to be thinner than others.
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AeiriMuse In reply to Onivale [2010-03-12 00:41:09 +0000 UTC]
That's what I meant. This was a small sketch I did on paper... I couldn't get the pencil to make thinner lines. hehe So I left it without them if that makes sense. Also, I had to REALLY darken this... You know how I draw. XD
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Onivale In reply to AeiriMuse [2010-03-12 01:00:20 +0000 UTC]
It makes sense.
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TEH-beXki [2009-11-02 22:14:10 +0000 UTC]
So perfect! In proportions and facial expressions and fur xD
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AeiriMuse In reply to TEH-beXki [2010-02-27 05:38:14 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure about perfect, lol, but I did my best to make it accurate. Thank you very much for your comment.
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TEH-beXki In reply to AeiriMuse [2010-02-27 18:51:16 +0000 UTC]
No problem ^^
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FateDarkstar [2009-09-24 14:40:34 +0000 UTC]
Whoa... this so neat Nona! I love the softness to it, I wanna reach out and pet her xD Lol I feel bad not getting on as much as I should Kain kinda grounded me from DA says it fucks with his comp..
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AeiriMuse In reply to FateDarkstar [2010-02-27 05:47:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Actually, he's probably right. A couple weeks ago, Oni got a virus in her laptop while she was browsing DA. Another friend of ours and I worked on it and saved it the other day. Get avast antivirus. It blocked it twice for me.
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Shaezen [2009-09-11 02:37:39 +0000 UTC]
I love your style! You draw fur very well, I hope to learn from it. ^^
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AeiriMuse In reply to Shaezen [2009-09-11 07:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. That means a lot. All I can really give for advice is to look at photos or actual animals and watch how the fur shifts when they move or when the wind brushes past them. That and keep practicing.
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AeiriMuse In reply to Aedriela [2009-09-04 19:40:13 +0000 UTC]
Ah... thank you. ^ ^ <3 This is one of my most recent. I've been working on everything you mentioned for a very long time. I still think there's room for improvement. hehe With enough practice and a keen eye, I'm sure you'll do so too. You have to realize I stare at Frosty all the time, as well as various wolf calendars that I refuse to throw away. lol I also look at my friends' pets. =3
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AeiriMuse In reply to Aedriela [2009-09-04 20:33:30 +0000 UTC]
Everyone starts from scratch. It's just about how you see things through your eyes, and through your mind. Never be afraid to explore your imagination entirely.
If you really want to see how I've grown, go to my gallery and at the top, click Scraps. All of my old art that I could find/post is there.
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AeiriMuse In reply to Eviecats [2009-09-04 08:02:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! ^ ^
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AeiriMuse In reply to Raven-Blood-13 [2009-09-04 00:48:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. Not just for the comment, but the favorite as well. It means a lot. I've been working really hard to improve. ^ ^
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Raven-Blood-13 In reply to AeiriMuse [2009-09-04 19:25:35 +0000 UTC]
you're very welcome! it looks great!
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AeiriMuse In reply to waterdancer [2009-09-03 22:06:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! <3 Here I was half expecting you to be the one to give me the critique. Guess you're too busy now, huh?
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waterdancer In reply to AeiriMuse [2009-09-04 20:16:28 +0000 UTC]
=o iunno, i just thought it looked good. XD
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AeiriMuse In reply to waterdancer [2009-09-04 20:28:28 +0000 UTC]
Really? You can't find anything wrong? Usually you're my star critique! lol *goes into shock*
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waterdancer In reply to AeiriMuse [2009-09-04 22:34:26 +0000 UTC]
i didnt want to critique. i didnt want to try and look at it and tell you things i thought you could do better.
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AeiriMuse In reply to AlbusaumLupus [2009-09-02 22:41:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! **blush** I've been trying to work on my art to make it less cartoon like.
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AeiriMuse In reply to AlbusaumLupus [2009-09-03 03:06:13 +0000 UTC]
It's the same thing that I look at them for too. Is how their legs and back looks at different angles.
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yiffboy [2009-09-02 14:15:56 +0000 UTC]
wtf +_o... this is awesome @.@
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AeiriMuse In reply to yiffboy [2009-09-02 22:41:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
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yiffboy In reply to AeiriMuse [2009-09-08 18:16:17 +0000 UTC]
welcome
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AeiriMuse In reply to Ace-Fox [2009-09-02 06:55:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And a double thank you for the favorite as well. ^ ^
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AeiriMuse In reply to mirzers [2009-09-02 06:51:23 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I'm so happy you like it! I figured if you wanted you could outline/color it or do whatever you want because it's YOURS. <3
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silivrenwolf [2009-09-02 04:25:48 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous gorgeous!!
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AeiriMuse In reply to silivrenwolf [2009-09-02 04:36:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! ^ ^ Hopefully, I can get the free sketches from my 10 sketch challenge done before I get my textbooks and really have to start working on homework. hehe
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