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My feeling is: You need a diagonal feature from upper left corner down toward lower right that is brighter so you can read the figure more clearly. A cloud would do the trick. But the current sky kind of bisects the composition. Actually, if you flipped it, and gave a greater perspective from top to bottom, I think it would tie the piece together very effectively. The alien "thing" is emitting its own light, so it will draw the eye.
One other small comment is that the ground could use a bit more definition to indicate atmospheric depth. There are 2 small boulders (2/3 of the way over toward the right, at the bottom) that have a degree of what I'm talking about; I think this could be strengthened a tiny bit and propagate the same treatment across more of the landscape.
Yer Pal,
--Steve
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Thanks Anazakel and I apologize for the late reply, it's been pointed out that I've been replying to comments incorrectly.
I appreciate your support!
Brian
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no problem! I loved that piece
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Thanks for schoolin' me! My only experience with the 40K universe is a promotional poster I saw in a game store window which featured large scale war ark of some kind. Very striking image.
I love that name though, eldar farseer, very provocative!
Brian
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i dont really know what to say, other than it looks beautiful
btw, i cant help but notice the resemblance to an eldar farseer on the focal ^^
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Thanks Yhette, much appreciated!
What's an eldar farseer?
Stay in touch,
Brian
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well that answers that question xD
an eldar farseer is a character from Games Workshops 40k Universe, there kinda a cross between generals and leaders of a segment of there race ^^
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Thanks for the heads-up yhette,
Sorry about the late reply, it's been pointed out to me that I've been replying in correctly so I apologize if you didn't receive my original response.
Peace,
Brian
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your welcome ^^
and dont worry about it, i javent been online much recently
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