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photoshop cs2 + wacom tablet, 2 hours,

thanks for looking.
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ales-kotnik [2013-01-04 11:01:03 +0000 UTC]

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Critique by ~TheBoyIAm
"The idea of the picture seems interesting, but I don't like the way it is painted. It should be more clear up.
I think that if you had spend some extra hours working on that painting it could become pretty awesome, it just need more specific details which will make it looks more real, more perfect."

-> "It should be more clear up."
-> "it just need more specific details which will make it looks more real, more perfect."


DO NOT, i repeat, DO NOT ever listen to critiques/suggestion like this.

As far style goes, it's the matter of taste. He might not like it, I LOVE IT. It's like you would be using palette knife (i don't have an idea how you achieve that with Photoshop).
It doesn't need to be "more clean up". It is more than obvious what it present.
You don't need to "spend some extra hours" and it doesn't need "more specific details". Painting is finished when artist feels like he don't want to overdone it. Pictures with brush and pallete knife strokes have tons more filings than overfinished photo-realistic paintings where you don't know if it's painting or photography.

However, everything is the matter of taste. Some people don't see painting finished if there is no "details". And they usually like paintings with tons of details even if painting doesn't have feelings, story, good composition, color contrast,..

No one can tell you what you should do and how. Your art is great, just because you do it in your way.

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VXYXV In reply to ales-kotnik [2013-03-28 00:50:47 +0000 UTC]

No offense to you but this critique was a total ass-pat. Critiques are meant to improve the artist but all you did was shower them in compliments with no information to help them broaden their artistic ability.

Please next time you think about writing a critique, make sure you have information to help improve their ability-- not enlarge their ego. That's what the comment section is for.

I agree with the above statement though, what that guy said was definitely not constructive criticism. People need to understand that opinions aren't always helpful.

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TheBoyIAm [2013-01-04 09:51:22 +0000 UTC]

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The idea of the picture seems interesting, but I don't like the way it is painted. It should be more clear up. The style of the young woman is pretty good. Her eyes are black which means that she is some kind of a demon, I like that element of the painting. I think that if you had spend some extra hours working on that painting it could become pretty awesome, it just need more specific details which will make it looks more real, more perfect. All in all, it is piece of art... Nice work aditya777 My advice: DON'T STOP DRAWING!!! : )

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Eastreach In reply to TheBoyIAm [2013-01-04 11:33:17 +0000 UTC]

I agree that while a little more detail would be good (maybe just sharpening up the features) there is something really wonderful about the thick, expressive mark-making. Thats what attracted me to the piece, and I think in this piece 'perfection' isn't needed. Personally, i would hate for these very 'painty' kind of marks to be airbrushed away because it gives the piece it's character as well as reflecting the theme of the 'demon' or whatever she is. So all in all i agree some more detail is in order, but i disagree with your rating for impact because i feel that the way it is painted actually makes an impact (at least, on me it did).

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TheBoyIAm In reply to Eastreach [2013-01-05 10:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, this is my first critique and I think in that way only because I like arts which looks like made for games, I mean professional... nothing personal to the painting : ) It is normal everyone to like it in a different way. I just prefer other style paintings, aditya has paintings like that, so I know she didn't added more details on this painting on purpose.

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kawka78 In reply to TheBoyIAm [2013-02-20 17:13:45 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree on the thing that: "It is normal everyone to like it in a different way." But... If you're looking for a natural painting between impressionists, then you have start study some history of arts and then you'll probably find your beloved art style.
"It should be more clear up."
Some arts was created on purpose the way they are. Digital painting finally grows for something, that can really be relative to the natural processes of creation. And i'm very glad about the fact. No offense. But i think it's some kind of curve of taste these days. Most of people look too often at the DTP effects based mostly on the Adobe CS instead the natural paintings. Cloned, blured shapes, flares and gradient shadows are the most wanted things on big arts... Pity. I'm just asking - where is the un-perfect human hand and pure imagination in all of this?

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SnowMountainHop [2017-02-04 15:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Convertion, software 7.0.
looking trough the eyes of a tired hub...

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Kitpashka [2015-08-13 23:20:41 +0000 UTC]

looks like artrage, nice work

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carolinejamhour [2015-02-17 08:08:37 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea how you achieved such painterlyness with photoshop! Looks awesome!

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abattte [2014-02-24 20:56:47 +0000 UTC]

exclente !Β 

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JackalStar [2013-12-15 10:40:09 +0000 UTC]

This would look amazing as a large oil painting.Β 

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MadameCreep [2013-05-20 09:47:11 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely lovely

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sleepingkatze [2013-04-04 00:40:53 +0000 UTC]

amazing!

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lil0princess0 [2013-01-11 08:56:31 +0000 UTC]

finally you allow comments ? ^_^ Just wanted to let you know that i think your art is so greaaat! always mysterious and electric

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Leila-LP [2013-01-07 21:58:52 +0000 UTC]

OMG (*_*) Looks like the real palette knife and paints!

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kadi-dote [2013-01-06 22:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Ψ΄ΨΊΩ„ Ψ¬Ω…ΩŠΩ„ Ψ¬Ψ―Ψ§

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LostLeaf [2013-01-05 17:34:14 +0000 UTC]

fantastic! a lovley combination of colours and the dark eyes gives a fine effect!
great work

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Mikandii [2013-01-05 15:05:46 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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stellartcorsica [2013-01-05 14:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Special!

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Tracy-Williams [2013-01-05 11:35:43 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! WOW!

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sad6549775 [2013-01-05 10:27:22 +0000 UTC]

love your works...they are unique as I could always tell them apart immediately when i am scrolling through my inbox

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Elodie-Papp [2013-01-05 05:16:28 +0000 UTC]

wow...just wow

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VKlee [2013-01-05 04:00:26 +0000 UTC]

jmm, ok, let see .....IS AWESOME!!!!



I'm a terrible critic

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Watsonny [2013-01-05 01:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Really beautiful. I love how the roses appear to be dripping.

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ms20 [2013-01-04 21:34:52 +0000 UTC]

cool

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AmbiguityArt [2013-01-04 21:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Woah, how did you get a Photoshop brush to look like a palette knife?

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vinyltigers [2013-01-04 20:06:18 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! Ignore the critiques, they're just jealous.

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VXYXV In reply to vinyltigers [2013-01-05 08:29:10 +0000 UTC]

You don't know what a critique is, do you?

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gurlsluvchocolate [2013-01-04 19:21:38 +0000 UTC]

And now I have the song Toxicity in my head, which is a very good thing lol

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georgepthibault [2013-01-04 18:09:19 +0000 UTC]

love it

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Tolomuco [2013-01-04 17:57:41 +0000 UTC]

I love It!!!!!! How do you archive so great strokes in photoshop????? please tell me!!!Love the real paint feeling and the color scheme, it have a great element comp... the orange ornaments in the hair takes you to the face in a sec. and don't let your sight to fall from the picture at the same time. Sorry if I misspell something, english is not my natural language.

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danbuter [2013-01-04 17:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Great pic!

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LOURDES-LAVEAU [2013-01-04 16:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Stunning!!

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signed-anonymous9 [2013-01-04 15:58:42 +0000 UTC]

Something very dark and mystical about this. Beautiful!

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yellowsmoke321 [2013-01-04 15:58:32 +0000 UTC]

pretty how the digital paint texture is like real paint

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Jet-Blu [2013-01-04 15:38:14 +0000 UTC]

.......................wow..........................

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NeverLandFairy40 [2013-01-04 15:15:31 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful!!

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Rutiej [2013-01-04 13:57:52 +0000 UTC]

cool love it

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Frekkle [2013-01-04 13:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Whoa I like the paint strokes! Feels like the whole thing is moving down in unison.

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Wyndaveres [2013-01-04 13:31:06 +0000 UTC]

stunning this is really well put together

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anamsohail [2013-01-04 13:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Awesumness...

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Aida666 [2013-01-04 12:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Oo amazing

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john2009 [2013-01-04 11:57:05 +0000 UTC]

perfect work

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pumpkinbear [2013-01-04 11:17:30 +0000 UTC]

wohohohoho! kerreeenski!

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aditya777 In reply to pumpkinbear [2013-01-04 11:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Oi oi

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pumpkinbear In reply to aditya777 [2013-01-04 12:05:57 +0000 UTC]

skinhead palsu! bikinnya painting ginih.

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aditya777 In reply to pumpkinbear [2013-01-04 12:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Bodooo wkwkwk, sibuk mulu ya lu?

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pumpkinbear In reply to aditya777 [2013-01-04 12:14:51 +0000 UTC]

lo kerja apa skarang?
berkhianat dari DP yah?
udah jadi artist painter.

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aditya777 In reply to pumpkinbear [2013-01-04 12:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Jadi tukang tambal ban, wal.. .___.

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pumpkinbear In reply to aditya777 [2013-01-04 16:35:05 +0000 UTC]

sering dapet commission gitu ga?
lo bisa painting2 ala artgerm ataw si ahbiasaaja ga?
kayanya bisa deh..
kalo bisa, mau dong kirimin porto2 lo yg setipe itu..
kayanya studio gw lagi butuh painter gitu deh..
syapa tau kita bisa satu studio..

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