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Description i'm fooling around and testing new lipstick.
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Emerald-Depths [2009-11-12 22:44:04 +0000 UTC]

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This is such a beautiful portrait. Among a large number of deviations, this one caught my eye because of the amazing color contrast. I really like the porcelain look of the skin; it really adds to that contrast.

The lips get most of the attention; however, in the smaller view of the image, I am somewhat distracted by the eyes due to the dark eye shadow. The only thing I can suggest is lightening up the eye shadow or adding a little color to the cheeks to add balance in a bit of post editing.

That is just a very minor suggestion, though. This is already a wonderful photograph. You are a very stunning girl. Keep up the great work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

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addnill In reply to Emerald-Depths [2009-11-12 22:53:57 +0000 UTC]

oh, my first critique ever -- and not bad at all.
thanks for advise i will work on my cheeks next time

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Emerald-Depths In reply to addnill [2009-11-12 22:55:22 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. ^^

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Meiyoguruma [2010-10-08 15:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Simply amazing.

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zaz14ispottermad [2010-02-23 20:42:56 +0000 UTC]

CONGRATULATIONS
THIS PICTURE HAS JUST BEEN FEATURED IN MY JOURNAL
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WELL DONE ON SUCH A BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF ART

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NigNag [2009-12-20 20:38:34 +0000 UTC]

I love this photo. You are an absolutly stunning young woman. I don't have a premium membership or I would critique your work. Hope you don't mind if I add you to my friends list.

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addnill In reply to NigNag [2009-12-22 13:55:49 +0000 UTC]

oh, thanks! and i don't mind at all

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hievreyone [2009-12-11 06:18:47 +0000 UTC]

Looks beautiful. :3
You're beautiful!
I just dont like the gems but this is amazing!

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addnill In reply to hievreyone [2009-12-14 20:48:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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hievreyone In reply to addnill [2009-12-16 05:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. (:

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Bloodlustsecrecy [2009-11-30 23:15:06 +0000 UTC]

This is an image i would think elana(from vampire dairies) would look like, its a stunning photo ;D

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addnill In reply to Bloodlustsecrecy [2009-12-01 11:00:14 +0000 UTC]

hihi. i saw some series of vampire diaries aaaaaand yes - she looks nice so thanks

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Bloodlustsecrecy In reply to addnill [2009-12-01 23:07:20 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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7Roses1BrokenHeart [2009-11-16 04:33:52 +0000 UTC]

i adore this

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addnill In reply to 7Roses1BrokenHeart [2009-11-24 22:52:37 +0000 UTC]

:brushteet:
thaaaaaanks!

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littlePIXY [2009-11-14 11:39:45 +0000 UTC]

nice

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addnill In reply to littlePIXY [2009-11-14 18:17:25 +0000 UTC]

(sun)

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K-I-W-I-E [2009-11-14 06:12:21 +0000 UTC]

mmm ^^

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addnill In reply to K-I-W-I-E [2009-11-14 18:17:02 +0000 UTC]

(sun)

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limonkaie [2009-11-13 17:35:58 +0000 UTC]

i love the idea

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addnill In reply to limonkaie [2009-11-14 18:17:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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limonkaie In reply to addnill [2009-11-15 08:47:00 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome

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Boniite [2009-11-13 14:48:59 +0000 UTC]

šī bilde atgādina to tavu bilde,kur tev tā puķīte pie lūām.
bet ļoti patīk. +10

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addnill In reply to Boniite [2009-11-13 23:26:51 +0000 UTC]

jaa, jaa, es zinu. man vienkārši..patīk tā poziņa, tāēc viņa vienkārši laužās laukā

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xoFoxyGirlox [2009-11-13 00:56:43 +0000 UTC]

You're pretty. ^^ If that is you. I don't like the gems though. They make the lips unappealing and chunky looking. Also, perhaps making a bit of a kissy face might make it look a little better. The small gap of the lips looks...odd. Sorta. Maybe adding a clear gloss to the lips before the gems were added would balance it more and adding a darker colour to the inside of the lips where the mouth meets and create some sort of illusion. Just my thoughts. No harm meant.^^

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addnill In reply to xoFoxyGirlox [2009-11-13 11:04:06 +0000 UTC]

ha. thanks..and thanks for advise ;D maybe it would be better as you explained

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xoFoxyGirlox In reply to addnill [2009-11-15 04:32:06 +0000 UTC]

No problem at all. You could do all kinds of tricks with your makeup to change your face. I think that you would look great with some neon greens, bright yellows and deep golds. Something crazy and almost Mardi Gras....

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