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Description LIEK! This is Addi's demon! Isn't she KAWAII! This is her undies too! She's got cherries which represent innocence as she tramps around Konoha doing practically every guy in sight. Cuz Addi's Kawaii and innocent

OKIES! I gots a story 4 THIS! (lol it hurts to talk like this):

Addi's chocolate hair fluttered gracefully in her face, she blinked her long lashes. Her aqua eyes searched the trees of one of Konoha's many forests. Her lithe figure moved like a feline, through the trees, her diamond eyes glowed in the night. Just then she heard a chuckle, she turned around gasping. "Hello Addi..." A flame-haired, freckle-faced anbu.

"Hello...Gavven." Addi snarled, her perfect cupid-bow lips turned up in a snarl. Her ivory skin was suddenly touched gently. "It's been awhile since we've been alone ya know...." his thick irish accent lingered in her ear as he whispered it gently....into her ear >_>

Addi pushed him away "Gavven!" She suddenly screamed having a bitchy hissy fit of melodrama. "If I've told you once, I've told you thousand times! I don't love you...and without love...there can be nothing." She turned away quickly as tears started to stream down her ivory face. Then started conversing with herself. "I can't! I don't love him! STOP TELLING ME WHAT TO DO! NO! I can't, please, please don't make me!" She started to scream as her slender hands hid her gorgeous face. Long lashes closed as she tried to hide her glowing tears. Gavven frowned sadly, "Addi, I-" He sighed and looked down unsure what to say when suddenly he was on his back in the dirt looking up to bright glowing pink eyes. "Hello Gavven....miss me?" Her voice was suddenly deeper, more sultry.

Gavven's eyes widened for half a second then narrowed "you, YOUR ADDI'S DEMON!" He shouted the obvious in an unnecessarily loudly fashion. She smired, those cupid bow lips tilted up in the most malicious smile Gavven had ever seen on sweet little Addi's face.

"I swear, if you hurt Addi-" He started in a low growl, he started conjuring his own element over the darkness(and fire, and ice and earth and lightning and dragons and wolves and*is shot*) "Are you kidding me? You've hurt her far worse then I ever could. You just love," she leaned down and started undo-ing his shirt " to mess with that poor little girl's head. You love," she started kissing his neck and moving down his chest as she continued to undo his clothes "to tease her, make her suffer. It's delicious to watch." Gavven didn't REALLY want to stop the obviously very sexy demon on top of him, but he couldn't do this, not to Addi...

He pushed the demon off with minimal effort and started buttoning his shirt(regardless of the fact that the anbu shirt DOESN'T BUTTON cause it's a tank-topy overall-ish thing, but it sounds good doesn't it?)

He turned to face the demon but she was already down to her cherry pink and black, lacey panties. His face started to turn red "aw shit....."

The demon Addi giggled(which I'd assume would sound weird cause her voice is supposed to sound like an adult woman) "Are you....afraid?" Gavven bit his lip.

'Afraid of losing control of myself....' he thought.



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GAAAAAHHHHH!!! I think I blew my brain out *twitch* lol but yeah Gavven I've decided has a range of hair colors(lol along with skin colors) but basically he's got reddish brown hair and he's tan. But since I'm forever forgetting the colors, they're gonna chance often. Like how Addi goes from a light brown to a dark brown hair and looooonnnggg hair to shorter hair.

Mmmmm, not too sure how the story matches the picture but it was fun writing shitty like that XD I love writing marysue fics because they're just SO ridiculous! Buttoning up an Anbu outfit? HOW! Their outfits more like overalls then a button up XD and he's wearing TWO LAYERS! A black turtleneck underneath and a weird guard on top of that! But oh well. And I still can't figure out how Addi got her clothes off so quickly, but I guess in teh world of fan fiction XD ANYTHING GOES!


Mmmmm, am I forgetting anything? Oh well, if I remember I'll post a journal about it XD

Addi, Gavven (c) me (lol though really, WHO in their RIGHT MIND would want to steal these two?)
Naruto universe (c) Masashi Kishimoto
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Comments: 16

MelloObsesser235 [2011-01-05 07:13:10 +0000 UTC]

D: MY BRAAAIN! IT HUUUUUURTS! D:

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Addi-Pink-Power In reply to MelloObsesser235 [2011-01-11 06:37:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh noes D8 Damn you Addi! Giving people brain damage D<

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MelloObsesser235 In reply to Addi-Pink-Power [2011-01-11 22:40:01 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Profiling-Reality [2010-12-03 15:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh geebus, why must Sues always have a dark inner demon of sorts?


In other news I got some pretty good giggles out of this, though laughing kinda hurts for I am sick

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Addi-Pink-Power In reply to Profiling-Reality [2010-12-04 03:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Cause they're super KEWWWLLLLLL~~~ lol honestly I have no idea though XD It does seem to be either an Uchiha or a demon isn't it? I think it's cause the idea of having a demon is cool~

lol thanks Aw no D8 I feel your pain I was sick yesterday(yup got through the cold then I hurt my right index finger now I can't draw for a few days DX) damn illness is spreading around like crazy! IT'S A CONSPIRACY!!! D8 D8 D8 crazy~ I hope you feel better though D8 It's hard to enjoy a good sue-parody while sick XD

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Profiling-Reality In reply to Addi-Pink-Power [2010-12-04 03:13:57 +0000 UTC]

My second question is why is the demon always uber sexy, while giving the Sue awesome powers, and why is it that all demons want to do is get some?

Everyone gets sick this time of year! I blame the bipolar weather!

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Addi-Pink-Power In reply to Profiling-Reality [2010-12-07 02:13:10 +0000 UTC]

lol probably the same reason why their only weakness is that they're too beautifully sexy for their own good or that they immediately become weak and helpless when a sexy male character is around XD

DAMN WEATHER! Kill it, kill it DEAD! lol

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Profiling-Reality In reply to Addi-Pink-Power [2010-12-07 02:15:10 +0000 UTC]

I cant help but laugh when something like that happens XD
Though now that I think about it, my friend's character is guilty of all of that and the inner demon >.>

And how exactly do you kill weather? XD

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Addi-Pink-Power In reply to Profiling-Reality [2010-12-07 02:18:46 +0000 UTC]

lol it's kinda funny XD Especially when the character is like, SUPAR AWESUM MEGA KEWL CHARACTER!!11!!! Then somehow they lose all powers for some inexplicable reason XD
Aw it's fine though~ everyone has a friend whose character has sue-ish tendencies, but that's what friends do lol I'm sure, if she hasn't already, realize the sue-ish-ness of the character and either change it or just accept it. Bah some sues can be cool right? lol like Lora Croft....um...or Elizabeth Swan. Lora Croft more so but I think what makes her cool still is that she never gets the guy she wants cause they either always die or they leave her :/

I have no idea but I will find a way! lol

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Profiling-Reality In reply to Addi-Pink-Power [2010-12-07 02:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Lora Croft is totally bad ass, so are the chicks from Charlie's Angels...strong female characters are amazing~

I believe it!

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Addi-Pink-Power In reply to Profiling-Reality [2010-12-11 02:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Charlie's Angels are pretty cool too. Honestly I think most strong female characters are less likely to be accused of being a marysue than a weak female character because weak characters are just soooo damn annoying DX It's like....ARGH I don't even know it's offensive I guess? lol I don't know XD

lol damn straight!

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Profiling-Reality In reply to Addi-Pink-Power [2010-12-11 02:51:54 +0000 UTC]

I think its rather sexist that female characters are always so weak

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Addi-Pink-Power In reply to Profiling-Reality [2010-12-11 03:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Seriously! Argh like Bella, I use her a lot because she's just, so....ARGH! Women have been striving for YEARS to be equals to men! And here Bella goes around like a chicken with her head cut off the second Edward leaves her. I understand a little sadness and a little angst but I mean come on they're teenagers! Love hurts and it won't last forever! I mean I'm not an extreme feminist by any standards but why are these women not embracing their power? I think that's why Lora Croft and Charlie's Angel's are so appealing, they're sexy AND strong and they aren't afraid to use their sex appeal. A character that's like a tumor the male character can't seem to get rid of is just so disgusting. Bah sorry I got a little carried away XD

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Profiling-Reality In reply to Addi-Pink-Power [2010-12-11 03:33:24 +0000 UTC]

I love it when people get carried away! 8D
I hate Bella as well...God she makes me want to slap Smire with her own book...I can write better than her!

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WaterdragonTonx94 [2010-05-06 20:53:51 +0000 UTC]

This is prisles

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Addi-Pink-Power In reply to WaterdragonTonx94 [2010-05-07 02:41:52 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks XD I had fun doing it 030

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