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addem — overdrive
Published: 2004-03-26 06:50:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 192; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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The sharp tongue Seperates my skinTears offering you Dead flowers within
Veins flowing Blood for water
Giving me pain Like no other
Suck on it FEED on it
Give me your mouth I will bleed in it
Never you cry Never you smile
Never is forever every once in a while
My messy emotion My tussled life
My windburned heart
Is in overdrive
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Comments: 3
I'm not a poet, so I always find it hard commenting constructively on poerty. But, anyway, I like this. There is definite energy and rhythm in this work. Great job
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wow, thanks! Im pretty critical about my stuff. I appreciate the comment and favorite addition.
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