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Published: 2004-09-06 02:55:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description its not much longer
the darkness grows stronger
a table full of pills
shows just how the pain kills
did he know something i never knew?
what was a boy supposed to do?
well, now i know my purpose
i just dont know when
i got in the way
and someone will again.

now, everything i build dies
and my feelings cant disguise
my heart's crust of rust
there's no more trust
come take a step inside
pick at my brain
feel my memories
and look at my pain
look in my mirror
you wont like what you see
i only wish
you felt like me.
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Comments: 9

flaery [2005-03-16 22:52:00 +0000 UTC]

I like the emotions in this. I'm not a fan of the rhyming in this, but that might just be personal preference.

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DorothyJ [2004-10-01 05:58:22 +0000 UTC]

"i only wish you felt like me"....all of this is good, but that part got to me. I liked the whole poem, but those two lines alone pushed me to add this to my favorites... good work!

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The only person worth your tears would never make you cry...

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caitlong [2004-09-17 23:25:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm impressed with the way you could capture such a complicated chain of emotions. This is such a wonderful and powerful piece. Bravo.

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RavensTear [2004-09-10 12:19:56 +0000 UTC]

i agree with ~R4Z0RBL4D3R0M4NC3 on this....there is nothing to say but that this is amazing and breath taking....very good...

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addem In reply to RavensTear [2004-09-10 23:34:36 +0000 UTC]

wow. i never expected to get this kind of reaction.
very nice of you to find my ramblings worthy of a favorite, much less a comment.

thank you.

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RavensTear In reply to addem [2004-09-11 00:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome... ramblings can reveal alot about thought and i am fascinated by thought....it very muchly deserved both fav and comment..

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R4Z0RBL4D3R0M4NC3 [2004-09-08 20:40:02 +0000 UTC]

i don't know what to say. that is just... amazing and breath-taking.

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addem In reply to R4Z0RBL4D3R0M4NC3 [2004-09-10 23:30:58 +0000 UTC]

i appreciate that. its people like you that make it easier to submit things that i normally wouldn't.
thanks you rule.

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R4Z0RBL4D3R0M4NC3 In reply to addem [2004-09-11 16:46:21 +0000 UTC]

i don't, but thanks. you're very welcome.

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