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Published: 2004-07-09 21:39:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description ever since I first met you
its been eating my insides
rotting me away
the heart is working harder
the machine is thumping
in the center
of me

the doctor wont give me chemo
but did offer therapy
he doesn't know
it suffocates me
the compromises
the surprises
your eyes

kill this parasite
taking my life
I will never miss
the gleam in my eye
the raindrops in yours
the fear
of being alone

just let me
clone this palindrome
selfish me
no more
if you cut me loose
I can be myself
by my self
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Comments: 15

Jstermn [2004-09-08 12:54:20 +0000 UTC]

i havent read much yet....but i do like this one....oddly enough i dont think i would normally like this style of writing....but you pulled it off.....

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addem In reply to Jstermn [2004-09-08 16:39:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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caitlong [2004-09-05 23:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Great work, you did a wonderful job at capturing a lot of very vivid emotions. I like your style of writing a lot.

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addem In reply to caitlong [2004-09-05 23:58:32 +0000 UTC]

you are too kind.

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DEVIL-LIVED [2004-08-28 02:34:43 +0000 UTC]

wow......... trully amazing........

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xprettypoet [2004-07-30 09:25:05 +0000 UTC]

very lovely.

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addem In reply to xprettypoet [2004-08-01 14:40:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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xprettypoet In reply to addem [2004-08-02 12:17:21 +0000 UTC]

absolutely.

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stndyuuki [2004-07-10 22:41:00 +0000 UTC]

yeam man where the hell did you go? nice poem...it's different. me likes.

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addem In reply to stndyuuki [2004-07-11 13:11:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks man!

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TheGrimSon [2004-07-10 06:21:38 +0000 UTC]

holy crap dude, where have you been? also. amazing work. -grim

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addem In reply to TheGrimSon [2004-07-11 13:09:58 +0000 UTC]

lets see..
i moved - [next exit down from my old residence]
busy with home remodeling. [work]
i am going to try to write more often.
thanks for the compliment
what have you been up to?

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TheGrimSon In reply to addem [2004-07-21 02:00:03 +0000 UTC]

staying alive. please, no dancing jokes. -grim

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OssoSan [2004-07-09 22:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice work!

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addem In reply to OssoSan [2004-07-10 05:37:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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