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Published: 2006-09-11 11:56:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description To be betrayed
To wish for death
There is but silence
No comfort here
A statue frozen
A solemn state
A coming winter
A closing gate

To be freezing
My skin turns blue
This sickness coming
This acid burns
Internal bleeding
My lungs collapse
From all the crying
From falling flat

This trampled soul
This mind collapsed
You said you’re mine
But you lied a lot
I gave you mine
I thought returned
It’s lost forever
My time destroyed

Stained my eyes
I cut with glass
Of empty lives
So in me died
The will to live
A heart of love
A glimpse of hope
It won’t be back

Now I reflect
I always knew
You would not need me
Like I did you
When friends arose
Cast me aside
My heart is crushed
Now I need pills
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Comments: 3

redheadviolinist [2006-09-11 11:57:49 +0000 UTC]

But you should be! It's great!

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adamh23 In reply to redheadviolinist [2006-09-11 12:35:31 +0000 UTC]

It's not the final piece which I'm not proud of. Just the content and it's basis. I'm also worried that writing's not helping me anymore. I'm not sure whether it was to begin with either for that matter.

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redheadviolinist In reply to adamh23 [2006-09-11 13:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, I think it's very good!
Feel free to chat to me if you need someone, yeah?

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