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adamh23 — Destruction
Published: 2006-07-31 10:33:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description I’ve seen the light in destruction
There is a time for every man
To tear things down in anger
To vent away frustration
But to rely on demolition
To turn positive to negative
If you don’t know when it’s too much
It may become too late

I’ve seen you look so low
Inflict such on yourself
Is it mere imagination?
Or some inner conflict
You tell me you deserve this
That this is punishment
But you gotta know what’s too much
Before it becomes too late

Then those who pass the point
There can be no return
Destroyer of what was dear to me
You never stopped to think
You didn’t consider me
Wrapped up in your filth
Realise my pains too much
Do you still care if it’s too late?
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Comments: 5

svengirl666 [2006-08-02 10:24:47 +0000 UTC]

very clever in putting it together like that, i attempt writing but its the most difficult way to express yourself , awesome work

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adamh23 In reply to svengirl666 [2006-08-02 11:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Thankee.

I find writing the only way to express myself properly, cause I'm not good enough at drawing or other stuff.

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AdoraBell [2006-07-31 11:29:38 +0000 UTC]

I love it. It says so much of what i've wondered about myself.

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adamh23 In reply to AdoraBell [2006-07-31 13:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks for saying so, though I still think it's a little rough around the edges. Thanks for adding it as a fav too, I didn't think it would be worthy. Shows me.

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AdoraBell In reply to adamh23 [2006-07-31 13:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Well yes, i like it. Rough is good at times. The one i submitted today is also rough so...

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