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Published: 2014-07-29 16:03:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 334; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 0
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acrostics on a loom.Βsomething lingering under the surface on this one... considering writing a part ii, if the psyche tempts me enough.
(maybe i'm missing something, but it seems dA won't allow me to put images in any other poetry category except found/visual...? this really should be in traditional+fixed, i suppose.
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"like she's spent 3.2 million years of hominid evolution at the local gas station waiting for somewhere to go"
--love that. the juxtaposition of something as grand as human evolution and something as small as a gas station loiterer.
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"limbs skimming linoleum"
alliteration-vowel-sound-combos
visions of dry desert and a dusty
arid western locale. Β and 'lucy'
as the title evokes, yes, the early
human hominid, but every other
rare Lucy ever met. Β the whole
poem is memorably old and dry,
and a bit... ghostly 
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