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Ode To The Tsundere
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Published: 2014-03-20 18:31:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 11606; Favourites: 510; Downloads: 43
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He loves me not, he says with blushing cheek.He'd rather die a fiery death than kiss
A girl with zero sex appeal, a geek
(he says it twice for extra emphasis).
So why the constant stares? I ask. He lies.
He hates the sight of me, he quickly shouts β
Without the scorn his panicked oath implies.
The dissonance contributes to my doubts.
Alone one day, he smiles at me; I gasp.
A joke? A lapse of judgment? Or perhaps
A glimpse of truth at last within my grasp!
I kiss his cheek and watch his walls collapse.
A victory for me, like striking gold.
For him, a death by kisses hot and cold.
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Comments: 190
It sounds simply, utterly wonderful. It was a delight to read, and captures the essence of the term "Tsundere" really well.
Also, it made me laugh, so there's always a plus.
Congrats on the DD, it's certainly deserved!
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This is a great poem. I actually know what Tsundere is(Thanks to a random convo about random things. Isn't it nice how that works?)
Nice Poem, nice phrasing, nice poem overall.
Thanks for sharing!
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No specific anime. Just a trope found in many anime series.
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....can i hear e story of this bet came to create this master piece?
Because... My grin is currently destroying my face
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I have a friend who's always trying to sucker me into bets...about, well, everything really. I finally agreed to one.
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And what made you agree to this particular bet?
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I figured I could actually win it
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Did you show this to any of your teacher's?Β
Are you aware that this is on tv tropes...I think
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wait what?
This is on tvtropes??
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Yeah i was Β looking up tsundere quotes tv tropes... And next thing I know im here
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Okay som20 questions... Are you still in shock that your sonnet made tv tropes
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this is the internet. Nothing shocks me anymore
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But are you happy?
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about getting a DD, winning the bet, or about life in general? lol
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Life in general and, your sonnet earning a place in TV tropes
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I've had other stuff I've written end up on tvtropes. Still a bit surprised though. Life in general is...decent? I'm nervous because I'm moving to a new country soon
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Really? Like what
Thats good.
Where?
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just fanfic shit
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I got that part... But what WAS it?
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Tropes for my fic
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Alriht... What was its name?
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The Other Side of Tomorrow
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Huh jimmy neuteon... Cant say i know much about the series.
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tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.phpβ¦
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That's awesome. The language is a bit modern for the form but it works so well. Your rhyme and meter are flawless.
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Yes! You deserve that money for that! 
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Featured here-Β that1personuforgot.deviantart.β¦
Have a wonderful day! 
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Welcome! Lol and I know exactly how that feels....(submitted stuff in highschool once and nothing. Then submitted something I was all 'yolo'-moment and it got in .___.). Gah the world is weird ughhhh
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This sonnet is a cutie! :3 Great job!
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