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Description pierduti cu o singura sansa.

Made with:Z e n i t11
no-name cheap film200


"Pale colors paint the picture of mankinds usurped hallucination
You dreamt but alas you were dead.
A faded bruised clone of the imitation that was copied centuries ago
There is no wailing and no grief and there are not enough tears in the
sky to mourn the fall of man, not enough strength to raise our heads
and say farewell...

Heaven is empty...deserted the palace now lies...Renewal is at hand..."


Pazuzu---Hallucinations


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Comments: 35

SmokeStories [2010-01-22 11:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I found many types of pictures that look like this. But the only difference is that this one has that touch of old, thanks to the camera. It's not easy to photograph on film, but you have succeded to create a more than a decent photo. I like the grain and the touch of vintage of it.
But the subject is far from interesting. There are just some simple leaves. Also, the focus is not just right made. I have noticed a white spot in the upper part of the photo, probably because of the film.
Zenith pictures are always beautiful, and they bring that touch of old that is so beautiful.

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a14onymus In reply to SmokeStories [2010-01-22 17:18:10 +0000 UTC]

"You thought it was fair"


I accepted your critique because it is your opinion and I can respect it but it's not my fault that I do not use Photoshop to cover the white points you have seen in the shot(I am if you'd like an anti-digital guy) and I can say that it isn't my fault that I cannot afford a better scan.
The subject is not interesting for some of us but I have a special place for dried leaves.Simple leaves you said...I say that simple is the most complex thing ever done so far.

The focus is done using macro lenses and I would like to know why you consider it bad.

Anyway thank you for your critique.

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agnieszkakryspin [2011-05-14 17:33:34 +0000 UTC]

i like colours. so cold and warm at the same time.

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Lunox-baik [2010-05-27 19:46:03 +0000 UTC]

this picture has a great character!

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Moody2C [2010-05-13 00:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Mi-a placut lucrarea dar m-am decis sa adaug un comentariu dupa ce am citit critica. Nu ma voi aventura in dezbateri privitor la tehnica. Nu doar pt. ca nu este punctul meu forte, nu pt. ca n-ar avea ea importanta ei ci mai ales pt ca in opinia mea conteaza mai putin corectitudinea / perfectiunea tehnica in raport cu rezultatul final. Exista lucrari perfecte din pv tehnic care nu transmit mai nimic.

Backroundul are intr-adevar o consistenta cvasi picturala - este suficient de tulbure dar si suficient de luminos pentru a pune in evidenta cat de fragil sunt pozitionate cele doua frunze.
Intr-un acord perfect cu ideea pe care o transmiti.

M-am uitat astazi mai atent prin galeria ta - ai multe lucrari deosebite si extrem de reusite - majoritatea ar merita comentarii mai vaste.
Felicitari si.. keep up the good work.
ps: mi-as permite o sugestie - macar in cazul fotog. conceptuale poate ca n-ar fi rau daca ai introduce pe undeva si o traducere a titlului, pt privitorii care nu cunosc romana. Ia-o doar ca pe o idee personala..

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e1i2m3 [2010-04-28 09:42:30 +0000 UTC]

You could lower your ISO and your picture would be great

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a3t3rnum [2010-03-05 21:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Absolut superb !!!

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a14onymus In reply to a3t3rnum [2010-03-05 21:24:09 +0000 UTC]

mercii fain

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Ralooq [2010-01-31 16:14:49 +0000 UTC]


Featured here :[link]

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saintofsincity [2010-01-29 21:05:39 +0000 UTC]

perfect

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SimplyShane [2010-01-28 06:23:46 +0000 UTC]

Contrary to the critique, I think you nailed the focus. Yes, leaves are common, but I really love this interpretation. Great shot.

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PoetryMan1 [2010-01-27 23:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice capture! it's interesting!

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felibree [2010-01-26 20:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Soft and tactful

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vingavild [2010-01-26 19:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Your pictures are really beautiful!
I like this one a lot!

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temporariness [2010-01-26 17:48:51 +0000 UTC]

Featured in [link]

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a14onymus In reply to temporariness [2010-01-26 18:30:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you so so very much

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liteumprableu [2010-01-25 04:58:16 +0000 UTC]

This kind of shots are very amazing, I've took some like this one and i really love this one because if i close my eyes to the photo it's like if i would be looking a picture. There's a cold impresion and something of fall, it's very conceptual if you want to think to too many ways. Good!

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Nirelleth [2010-01-24 23:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Love the background. Really great tones!

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ElevenIsTheNumber [2010-01-24 21:43:51 +0000 UTC]

very nice, so fragile!

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ILMys [2010-01-24 20:12:42 +0000 UTC]

perfect.

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gascogner [2010-01-24 19:44:04 +0000 UTC]

It's such a great shot.

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Optimara [2010-01-23 21:05:43 +0000 UTC]

Great job, I really like it

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tom-cruz [2010-01-23 20:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Great shot, But the noise make the qualty less

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elizabethpoti [2010-01-23 05:20:34 +0000 UTC]

film! dust spots - makes me want to drag out my old 35mm - love the composition tho - i know you were seeing something else when you looked at this leaf - and - i do too!

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Whimsical-Dreams [2010-01-23 01:52:17 +0000 UTC]

    Your incredible work has been featured in my latest journal , thank you for sharing your works with us!

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a14onymus In reply to Whimsical-Dreams [2010-01-23 10:09:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much for featuring my shot



I appreciate it a lot.


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yaeiea [2010-01-23 00:51:38 +0000 UTC]

very nice focus! it's a little grainy but, it's cool ^-^

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Beckibracelet [2010-01-22 19:53:19 +0000 UTC]

This was featured in my journal: [link]

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a14onymus In reply to Beckibracelet [2010-01-22 20:11:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much


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poimaine [2010-01-22 15:37:10 +0000 UTC]

they are just simple leaves if you miss the point, whereas the picture is conceptual (referring to the critique).
atleast, that's my opinion... as long as it gives me a feeling, any kind of feeling, i like it.
of course, i'm being subjective.
aren't we all...

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Godwhohateshumans [2010-01-22 15:33:51 +0000 UTC]

beautiful work

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Toffefee [2010-01-22 15:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice shot! (:

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inObrAS [2010-01-22 14:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work!

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melydebs [2010-01-22 11:52:14 +0000 UTC]

very amazing. add my fav <3

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bitterforever [2010-01-22 11:50:14 +0000 UTC]

I don't know much about the camera you use here, but I like it and the bokeh reminds me of the one I like to get.

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