CeCore [2017-09-07 19:48:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh! I really like this concept. Though, it seems more like "Things People Fear". I see a couple phobias on here. Maybe it could just be things people have strong feelings about? But I like how concise a specific emotion like fear or hate is. It'd be cool to see this follow a new character every chapter. Or maybe a couple regulars, and how the power/fear/hate affects their life. And yeah, it could be a way to get over traumas, or in some ways, it could hinder recovery. Especially if the person uses the power to avoid the situations that are causing them stress, and not address it.
I really like how cute this is with your art style. I thought the idea of a claustrophobic getting teleportation was really good, and I giggled when she got chucked into the tree. I also liked your idea for paranoia, though mind reading could be option, too. The last panel made me laugh really hard when the mom came in and her room was surrounded in plush creatures. I thought that was a really creative way to use drawings for loneliness.
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A-zephyrxd In reply to CeCore [2017-09-08 12:30:47 +0000 UTC]
1. Your comments are really detailed and long and I think that's awesome
2. Seriously this kind of comments help quite a lot of artists, take notes people
3. Awww thanks (:3 , maybe each of their life'll come out as a one shot who knows~~
4. Yeah it's not really a full on comic based on traumas, I just heard these kinds of fear from a lot of my friends so I made this comic to cheer up the people who has the same fears as them
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CeCore In reply to A-zephyrxd [2017-09-08 23:37:49 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks. I try to be helpful. Is this just going to be a one shot comic then, or are you going to make more? Either way, it's cute and I hope it cheered up your friends.
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