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Published: 2008-10-13 17:12:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 5235; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 68
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FINALLY !!!! My submission for the Mosaïc fan project have benn up loaded !It have been lost sometimes in the limbs of the internet and needed some spelling and typo corrections (and even then, I made mistakes in the transcription of some words T___T. Shame on my bad english).
The story is from the great Martin Fisher . It was a pleasing short story to work on.
It took me some times to color and finish it while the first sketch was made pretty quickly. But my "serious" comics in France kept me away from this page. I learned some things while coloring it myself. But I guess some pro colorists like dyemooch or dcjosh would have done a waaaayyyy better job.
Other projects are on the way but I hope it won't take as much time to be published (almost one year in this case. There is sooooo much submissions for the Mosaïc project).
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And so? For you this is a poor paint-work?
It's amazing!
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like ive said so many time hehehe i love your style dude! 
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Thanks !!!
I think it'd be cool too ^^. But well.... there is already so much ansome drawers over there already.
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Take a breath and wait to the next one cause it will need some time.
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You kidding me? Your work is GORGEOUS man. You run circles around my best work. Panels 1 and 3 are AMAZING
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I'm not kidding. If you want to compare, you could try to color the next one that is ready to (I just inked it). If you agree I can do the preparation for you (color zoning and all...). Let me know, you busy man 
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I am crazy busy- but I'd LOVE to color your work, man!
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Oooookay. I wasn't expecting such a quick answer. I'm preparing the file with some references. let me know your E-mail adress in a note ^^.
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This is a great mosaic; you did a really nice job coloring the transformers in it.
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Thanks a lot. Coloring took me so much time. I'm not a natural at this.
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Thanks. Happy to see apreciation from a Mosaic specialist like you ^^.
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Aw shucks
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you will, but with better coloring hopefully
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hehe - doesn't anyone say 'thank you' anymore? 
(Oh crap - sorry I didn't get back to you - yes I got the pics sir thank you! ^_^ 
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thanks for remarquing the details... it makes them usefull.
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my pleasure sir
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I like the artwork, but I always have a problem with the writing with lots of TF writers, both fan and so-called pro... similarly, I had lots of beef with the TF and GIJoe cb writers when they first came out in the 90s, as did many; the creators called themselves diehard fans but their comics read like they didn't know jack about TFs or GIJoes (the following is directed toward ALL writers in general)
1- skip the Movie lines! (here "Autobrat")... it's like the "Star Wars: Clone Wars" series on tv now, where so many lines and phrases are taken from the original trilogy... it doesn't make me go, "oh haha!" it makes me feel like puking... write your own lines! Come up with something new! Here, come up with your own TF jargon! It'll be way more refreshing... if it's been done, don't do it!
2- know the characters!... in panel 4 here, Thrust would never say that line.. it's way too intelligent of a line for him... same with Bluestreak's lines here -- he's not that smart or calm; it sounds like something Prowl would say instead! As an example, there was another TF page that came out on dA not long ago, where Blot was doing a whole internal dialogue while in a prison cell (felt like his intelligence was a 9 or higher)... sorry, it doesn't match at all!
sorry for my rant
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No probs. All criticism is good to hear.
But this could have been expressed on the original TF Moasïc page through as it mostly concern the writer mostly 
Thanks for your "rant" anyway.
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yes, sorry, I remember seeing that Mosaic page (I can't remember how I got to that page back then... maybe my brother contributed to it as well?...)... I remember reading the top few pages and couldn't continue (huge page)... and my criticisms only concerned the writer, true (I think your art is great as always)... I probably come off too rude/strong in my comments about TFs' writing since I love them so much; my main reason being that I want to challenge the writers to come up with better stuff that makes more sense, at least to this old fan
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Again, no need to be sorry. Your criticism wasn't really rude to me. Only frank and it's not a problem to me
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Ça semblait plus comme il voulait que tu conformes a ses idées. C'était pas constructif, en effet, c'était vraiment, vraiment impoli. -_-
Les opinions ne sont synonyme avec les faits.
Est-ce que du français écorché va vous remonter moral? XD
Parce-que je vais essayer d'écrire ma critique en français. Ca va a) m'aider a pratiquer b) vous faire rire ou c) tout les deux. En tout cas, tout le monde sort gagnant. XD
Les lignes sont très aiguisée et claire, comme d'habitude. J'adore aussi le reflet sur la visière. C'est un détail très cool et ça donne du réalisme à la pièce. Les couleurs était bien fait, surtout en ce qui concerne la lumière et l'ombre, il y a de contraste belle.
Ça va? XD
Ah, et avant que j'oublie, je pense que j'aurais quelque(s) chose(s) spéciales pour vous bientôt. 83
(Je pense que je doive acheter un clavier français. C'est un peu énervant de cherches les lettres avec les accents qui ne sont pas de tête familier. XD)
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Merci pour cette critique trés élaborée en français qui plus est. J'aprécie beaucoup. Surtout que les ombres et les lumières m'ont donné beaucoup de mal.
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I saw the WIP of this comic and I love how it looks with the color and details. I like how you did the hands reaction for the Decepticon (don't know his name) as the Autobot teleports out of the base. Even adding the reflection of the download on his visor/eyes was a great little detail to include.
I dunno, Engriwsh it aren't dat hard. XD.
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I like how you point out all the details I really cared about while drawing it.
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That's really well done, goodluck.
And by the way, is that Bluestreak?
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Oooooh...that question....
lets find the answer here .
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Ahahaha Silverstreak, okay fine he can be that XD
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Yeah, I've got some artists working on scripts I wrote up and, by the time all is said and done, it'll likely be next year before I see thm posted up on the Mosaic page.
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But we can't regret the project is meeting so much success
We have to be patient but I agree it slows down the first enthusiam.
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Oh, most definitely. I'm just happy to have a forum for displaying any bit of my writing skills in TF comics. Kinda wish I could do stories greater in length than one page though.
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But more than one page would be too long to do for some drawers like me who have other works to do. So ...
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Well, yes, but not every artist has your limitations.
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