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Published: 2017-10-24 00:18:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 333; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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hey guys! I have a repaint of an oc! "Melanie Muffin"bio:
--General Info--
Name: Melanie Pacifica muffin
Nicknames: Mel, muffin, llama, cupcake
Gender: female
Age:19
Animal Familiar: cat
clubs: the losers club (her and her friends made a fake club) and the art club
Birth Date: 1998
Birth Place: Arizona
Birth Mother: Katrina
Birth Father: Bernie
adoptive mother: Emma
adoptive father: William
--Appearance--
Hair Color: MULTICOLOR!
Hair Length: two and a half feet
Hair Style: up in a ponytail
Eye Color: brown with muLTICOLOR
Streaks: everywhere
Streak Colors:...gAY (rainbow, I'm sorry I had to)
Skin Color: white (pale)
Sexual orientation: asexual
Weight:120
Height:5"5
Tattoos: has an amitani correct heart on the left side of her chest
Piercing: has a secret tongue piercing
--Weapon--
Weapon: a knife and a small gun, that her 'father' got her. (he is a hunter)
--Story--
One day when Melanie was only one, (she does not remember) Melanie was playing outside in the front yard when a police car drove up and a man came out, she watched him go inside then pull out his gun. She was already scared, but when she heard yelling from her dad and the man, she got up and ran to her neighbors. She grew up never knowing who her real father nor her mother was. She always thought that Emma and William where her mom and dad. But when they told her that she was adopted she was not that surprised. Her eyes are the thing that gives it away. Her mother had a rare genetic disease that gave her eyes a multicolor tint to them. Melanie had gotten it stronger than her mother. much stronger.
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Comments: 9
The character overall is pretty good! The bio is pretty solid (other than the gay joke -_-), and the design of her isn't too bad! But I will make some critiques:
I do like the design, however, there are a few issues I have. The eyes I feel should just be one color, and definitely not the color they are now. Maybe go for a light blue? The line work needs a few edits too... There is a bunch of variation and some parts where there is colored lines and not black lines. I'd keep the lines all one size (if you're using Photoshop I'd suggest a size 3-6), and use only black lines to outline. The hair and skin a VERY detailed, and look like you spent a bunch of time and work on them. But, the shirt is very underdetailed, and dosen't flow with the rest of the picture. I'd make everything at the same detail level, either high or low.
For the bio, I see very few problems. Just change sex appeal to sexual orientation, because sex appeal is what makes people attracted to her (large chest or whatever straight people like). Since she's 19, that puts her in 2002, so just keep things consistent there and you should be good!
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thank you for your constructive criticism! and sorry for that gay joke my friend made me put that in there, (-_-) and I don't use photoshop I use "paint tool sai" and ill fix it so it will have the same detail as her skin and hair, and make all the color completely black, and I will fix the sex appeal to sexual orientation, but the 19 and her being born(?) in 2002 is not true, if you look it up she would have been born in 1998. and thanks!
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No problem! That's okay, people are like that a bunch... What I ment was that her story would take place in 2002, but I'm blind so I read it as 1989 XD, so yeah, not 2002...
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lmao, i don't think she is THAT old. lmao. but, I forgot to tell you that I am going to have a story for her and she will have a reason for her eye color(s)
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I LOVE your character. She's really cool looking
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thank you! I worked really hard on it! I have a youtube video of me painting it. here is the link: www.youtube.com/watch?v=iT3D4G…
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Cool, I'll be sure to watch it, keep up the good work 😊👍
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