Comments: 13
Hito-Dama [2008-05-09 20:05:35 +0000 UTC]
Ever heard of Deathnote? If I got one of them. There'd be none of the scum left by tomorrow.
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estrayastar [2007-07-24 15:42:01 +0000 UTC]
Incredibly well done, I really hope you dont mind me quoting this (its for a paper on life, and society is one of my subjects X3)
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48Days In reply to estrayastar [2007-07-25 20:49:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Feel free to quote it if you like.
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estrayastar In reply to 48Days [2007-07-27 04:27:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^^
So you know a lot of the people who looked at my report thingy said they really liked it =]
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48Days In reply to estrayastar [2007-07-30 02:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Sweet. Which part of the poem did you quote?
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estrayastar In reply to 48Days [2007-07-30 03:34:45 +0000 UTC]
the very last stanza =3
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48Days In reply to xSxTxAxRx [2007-04-17 02:55:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, glad you like it.
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Jiinx [2006-05-18 22:18:40 +0000 UTC]
Huston, we have a bigass problem.
What’s the pain in the ass astronaut Oblem?
We landed in the ocean as planned Gus,
But the fish think we’re aliens and are shooting us.
Gawd I totally love this! Feck it, you're amazing! ^_^
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48Days In reply to Jiinx [2006-05-18 23:07:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. That stanza is my personal favorite. I thought a little comedy may help to get my point across.
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francees [2005-05-10 23:25:09 +0000 UTC]
i really love it. Youre not the only one with society problems. its terrible. my only poetry suggestion is maybe to focus more on the meaning and less on trying a ryhming pattern
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48Days In reply to francees [2006-05-17 16:44:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. This is a rather old poem, over two years old now. Now that I look at it again, maybe the rhyming was too forced.
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francees In reply to 48Days [2006-05-19 00:50:36 +0000 UTC]
well. we grow.
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