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yaman2020 [2011-09-15 19:31:12 +0000 UTC]

nice tee mtu

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321fun [2011-01-24 20:26:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot for all your advices I'm really glad you noticed my photo and even found some time to write about it
I'm still learning, so I hope everything will get better someday^^

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noodlesqueen [2011-01-23 02:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Hello there, I found this through GCC and felt like giving it a critique : )

So, I LOVE the location, and the fashion choice goes really well with it, in my opinion. Although there is a lot going on, the colours really tie the peice together! The pose is nice, if somewhat generic. This photo, for some reason, really gives off this vintage feel, so maybe fading it a bit, even if only at the edges, may make it look a little better. Maybe even just adding a very light blue overlay would make it a nicer. Also, cropping out the bottom would make it look a little cleaner. I know, this picture doesn't exactly say "clean," but the small rectangle of concrete draws attention away from the focus of the picture. Getting rid of it would definitely be an improvement.

Vision: 4 stars
Originality: 3 stars
Technique: 3 stars
Impact: 5 stars

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violetice [2010-12-07 03:12:17 +0000 UTC]

I like the model and I like the location, but this photograph is really busy. Everything is very saturated and the lighting rather uniform, so I have a hard time telling what you intended the focal point to be. In a shot like this, the model is usually the focal point--if that's the case, desaturating or lowering the contrast a bit in the background would help the model pop out more. Or if you have a chance to do a similar shoot, try having the model wear all black/darker gray, or something that stands out from the colors/tones of the surroundings.

Other than that, everything else looks pretty solid. The model's pose and expression are very nice and composition-wise the placement of the model works really well.

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beacska19 [2010-11-29 13:54:06 +0000 UTC]

great choice for the background, I would prefer a pair of slightly less dark colored trousers but the joined effect is lovely anyway

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