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13Enemies — Kill me

Published: 2013-09-17 01:46:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 640; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
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This beautiful song
Day to end - Dark tranquillity youtu.be/Dd0FhZtnuUQ

"(...) All the thoughts that you defined.
Tread the light again.
Take the pain away.
It feels as though time as tears,
Never seem to end. (...)"


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Comments: 7

Scribe1969 [2013-09-17 09:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic skill and imagery, love it.

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13Enemies In reply to Scribe1969 [2013-09-17 13:58:17 +0000 UTC]

hey thank you ^^

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SallyBJD [2013-09-17 07:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Darling, your drawing   .....I'm speechless!

The details are created with cleverness, the character's expression is full of feelings... clothes...flowers...feathers..they are wonderful....


But, now that you are improving, i'll permit me to give you some critiques...  

-I noticed your characters haven't a lot shadows... After putting all details and little precisions, you can with a brush (without ink or other, cleaned) just pass in the areas where shadows could be. The effect could be more soft again ^^

-Hum..Maybe you should return the cutter

 -Let me kiss you


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13Enemies In reply to SallyBJD [2013-09-17 12:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Aah

I think I understood, I'll Try.

A wet brush right?

 

I have to practice first where the

shadows could be And how it look.

 

I use the cutter to make lights but just

On paintings, ink paintings. So...

Mmm where do you think I should use it specifically ?

 

Well

Thank you for taking time to the

 compliments and corrections

I appreciate this a lot.

 

 

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SallyBJD In reply to 13Enemies [2013-09-17 13:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Your brush hasn't to be wet! You just have to draw with carbon (Not something which not able to be erasable with finger, if you see) and pass with the brush.

In this drawing specifically, you should accentuate shadows between hip and arm of the woman for example. Shadows have to be on areas where we have to see the different levels of the relief (the right arm of the woman is behind of her chest, here, so you have to put differentes nuances of shadows to accentuate the relief).
You have to imagine that your characters are on a sphere of light and the part of them which are oriented at center of the sphere are more bright than those one which are inclined in a other side.

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13Enemies In reply to SallyBJD [2013-09-17 13:54:22 +0000 UTC]

oh

sure, i'm using a smudger.


hm yeah...

well, it depends where the light comes from, but

you're right.

thanks!

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SallyBJD In reply to 13Enemies [2013-09-17 15:06:39 +0000 UTC]

 

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