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1000900054 — Fell once more.
Published: 2004-10-16 01:06:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 513; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 37
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Play my mindJust one more time.
I'm craving your game.
And it puts me to shame.
Were you playing my mind?
Or were you true this time?
Am i just a rebound?
Taking the place of someone you lost?
Or am i just an object of your affection
When you're bored?
Take me in
To spit me out
Scum of the earth
Left in doubt.
Hold me close
To trick me more
Falling for your games.
I fell once more.
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Comments: 12
Nice writing! The ending is awesome. Thankfully I've never been in that situation but perhaps it's just as bad to watch a friend go through it. Good job!
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Ugh.... It's not fun!
But i'm completely out of that situation now.
Thanks for the comment
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you know it's quite ironic, i've found myself in quite a similar situation right now. great write.
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Yeah.. I was in that situation at that time... But i'm not anymore!
Good luvk and thanks
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I love the glow of the picture, and I find it so powerful to put those three words straight across the page/poem.
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Woah!
It hasn't even been posted for an hour and already 3 comments and 2 favs.!
I didn't really expect people to like it THAT much.
Keep em' coming! They are appreciated
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Damn good... Have another fav, to add to your collection. I love your poems, they are great and you are magorly talented.
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good job!! from an expert :: cough*me*cough :: haha jk I'm not-- but its good 
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