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Published: 2018-12-25 17:36:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 233; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description I have been working on this for almost a week I'm soo glad its done xD

These are two more Ocs from my story named Amara (Left) and Milo (Right). I luv them so much

If anyone has any feedback feel free too comment C:

Also, in case its unclear, the things coming out of Amaras back are wings (like fairy wings)(Milo has wings too but they're feather and hard too see here)
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Comments: 15

vanoso [2019-01-03 13:52:21 +0000 UTC]

I love the dynamic going on here between the sitting character and the one that's standing with their back turned to them. I also really like how fluffy the background looks, it's very pretty and appealing. I think the rocks in this piece would look more visually cohesive if you shaded them using more solid blocks of shadows, as the planes of stone tend to be more squared off and solid, if that makes any sense (sorry if I'm not explaining that very well ).  As for the characters themselves, of course anatomy is important, but I think you did a fairly good job on that. My favorite is the one to the left for sure  I love their hair color, it really stands out against the purple. I think with the character on the right some studies on wings would really do wonders for how they appear in pieces like this, that way they don't get lost in translation. I also think if you used different hues close to purple (like leaning more towards blue or red on the color scale thing) it would really give your piece some depth and harmony. All in all I think this is a very put together piece that has a lot of character intrigue; it reminds me of a comic book cover! Like there could be this interesting story between the two, which makes me like this even more Keep up the good work!
 
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0TheBlueRabbit0 In reply to vanoso [2019-01-03 14:36:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback! I’m glad you liked it! I kinda understood what you meant with the rocks and I think I’m going too try and change them at some point C:
I actually do hope to start making a comic and if I do, these two would be major characters, and I have thought of using this piece as a cover!

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vanoso In reply to 0TheBlueRabbit0 [2019-01-06 04:28:52 +0000 UTC]

It would definitely make for a great cover and you should definitely go for it! Making comics is so much fun. If you put been half the effort you put into this piece into the comic then I think it’ll be great ^u^

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0TheBlueRabbit0 In reply to vanoso [2019-01-06 09:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank youu!

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ReiraShiver [2019-01-03 12:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Hello! So i wanted to write something about this because its so interesting. The character on the left seems a bit more like you spent more time on drawing her(?), than Milo. The expressions are great we can tell their Characters just by looking at them. The wings on Amara are such a good idea I like it!  As one said it before me the background seems a bit too simple but i like the shading and everything overall, nice concept

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0TheBlueRabbit0 In reply to ReiraShiver [2019-01-03 14:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Amhara is a lot more detailed since I have a lot more fun drawing girls, I’m gonna force myself to draw more guys this year xD
I’m glad you liked the piece and I’ll try working more on backgrounds too!

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ReiraShiver In reply to 0TheBlueRabbit0 [2019-01-03 16:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Good luck <3 

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0TheBlueRabbit0 In reply to ReiraShiver [2019-01-03 17:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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cravyeric [2019-01-03 12:33:32 +0000 UTC]

good job

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0TheBlueRabbit0 In reply to cravyeric [2019-01-03 14:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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cravyeric In reply to 0TheBlueRabbit0 [2019-01-04 13:47:31 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^-^

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cravyeric [2019-01-03 12:33:20 +0000 UTC]

good job

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WTFRandomHumanWTF [2019-01-03 11:20:21 +0000 UTC]

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You’re great at drawing! I love this artwork! The purple lighting is very well done and the character anatomy is overall great. The design of the characters in the piece are fairly high quality. The colouring and line art are very neat. The rocks are also drawn well but the background seems a bit too simple. The rocks yet being drawn so well don’t really fit in a background that simple because there are on 2 rocks in a purple area that is simple. I would either change the background so it has a bit more detail or I would make the rocks simpler.

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0TheBlueRabbit0 In reply to WTFRandomHumanWTF [2019-01-03 11:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the feedback! I’m glad my characters turned out okay! I’ll try and change the background up C:

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0TheBlueRabbit0 In reply to WTFRandomHumanWTF [2019-01-03 11:28:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad the characters turned out okay! I’ll try and change the background up later then C:

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