jinxauthor [2009-12-05 01:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey thar. I posted a journal entry on my page that I want you to read. It's a possible beginning to The Y Files Sequel. I have a lot more typed than what I posted, with fighting and interesting plot type stuff, but I want to know if the very beginning is too boring and drawn out before I get to that. Or is it too vague and lacking in room and feeling detail? Or is it good as is? I could use some criticism, so when you get a chance give it a read. Meanwhile, I will work on Chapter Six of my crazy teacher story!

Show it to Kate too and let me know what she says.

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Nonsense-Prophet [2009-07-13 01:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for watching

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ScorpionFan [2009-07-02 05:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Hello random deviant!

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Ilweran [2009-02-27 01:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the fav!!

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EvieLevens [2008-09-05 15:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for faving I Know You Will Be Happy Here

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Sadadoki [2008-08-13 00:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your really nice comment.

I like this shoe, too ^o^

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Chaotic-Canine [2008-08-12 22:19:33 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate the fav! ^_^

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sucrage-universel [2008-08-12 22:16:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the fav

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BloodyChance [2008-08-10 05:34:22 +0000 UTC]

^^ First Comment.

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