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[2007-07-12 00:42:31 +0000 UTC]
"Elroy"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 435; Deviations: 262; Watchers: 2695
Watching: 20; Pageviews: 652550; Comments Made: 793; Friends: 20
# Interests
Favorite movies: Fight ClubFavorite bands / musical artists: Disturbed
Favorite games: Xbox 360
Tools of the Trade: iPhone, MacBook
Other Interests: Movies
# About me
Current Residence: Hell on EarthFavourite genre of music: Rap/Rock
MP3 player of choice: iPhone
Shell of choice: Cassette
Wallpaper of choice: A giant airship
Favourite cartoon character: Johnny Bravo
Personal Quote: Don't quote me.
# Comments
Comments: 62
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Thank you very much for again considering my stuff worth to be included into your favorites.
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A rare older photo of that model you had for the before shot. I don’t believe I had ever seen that one before. Nice find.
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A belated one to you as well along with a happy new year!
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Merry Christmas again pal!
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Right back at ya! Hope you’re having a good one.
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I did, thanks! I Hope you enjoy yours too.
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Same to you pal : hug: Hope you had some good stuff this year. 
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Thank you very much for considering my stuff worth to be included into your favorites.
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Man I swore I was watching you. Well everything is fixed now XD.
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Don't think I think I changed anything. Same old account I started with. Thanks for the watch.
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Thank you for visiting my page. I enjoyed looking through your favorites selection.
Ned Fox
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You've spoiled me, 3 stories on a week. I always come back like "what this time!? :-D" and then I'm like "he's still human? Ugh!"
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Thanks for the kind words, and for faving 
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You're welcome. It was a great read.
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Here's a little token of thanks for your writing..
www.imagebam.com/image/bc62b83…
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From one writer to another, I'd like you to answer this poll on word choice:
What do you prefer to call it...
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I voted belly. As a writer I've used them all where they fit in context or to pull off an alliteration or evoke a feeling or just avoid repetition. But personally I prefer belly.
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Thank you for weighing in!
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Thank you for considering my stuff worth to be included into your favorites.
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No problem. The side by side comparisons are always fun.
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Thank you so very much for the faves! I love your work, so it means a lot to me.
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I meant to comment as well but my phone wasn't cooperating.
The stuff you've written is amazing. The detail and feeling you infuse into a couple relatively short stories creates a very vivid picture. Consider me your biggest fan.
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Well, thank you very much. What a great way to kick off 2014.
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Hi Elroy,
I more or less read all of your stories on deviantART, which is exceptional for me. I like how you depict physical and mental intimacy, and how it develops. And I like many of the women you describe. My favorite female characters are Rachel from “Chasing Rachel” and Kim, the brainy New Yorker from “The Swimsuit Challenge”.
Rachel's story is superbly sexual and sensual. “Chasing Rachel” contains a lot of passion. Rachel shows – at least in the beginning – negative character traits, but that’s not all. She develops from a criminal to almost an ideal woman: loving, caring, loyal – and growing.
Recently you wrote: “I'm doing some writing and an artist is going to do some illustrations for it.” I look forward to see the results of your collaboration. This is the right approach. When I read your stories, I wished to develop a more graphic image of the gaining women, e.g. of Kim or of Rachel with her long legs, black hair and „crooked Brooklyn nose“. “What could Rachel look like?” I asked myself. Several pics came to my mind, which might serve as inspiration to create an image of your lovely female character and her growing curves. Two sexy black-haired feeder women who start to gain weight themselves are magmaman’s Tanya and poundforpoundcake’s Vivian Heller from his commission work “Vivian's Experiment”. I also thought of hadoukenchips’s “Kate and Mel” weight gain sequence. If one imagines dark-haired Mel as Rachel, Kate might be Cheri. Another great piece of weight gain art is AloysiusEroticArt’s Gina Carrano BBW.
Graphic weight gain sequences would be awesome, e.g. featuring Rachel or Kim or one of your pear shaped ladies. The picture sequences could illustrate the various stages of their sexy weight gain.
I also would love to see pics of a pear shaped Doctor Vanessa Van Holden wearing her black thong instead of her business skirt. I would appreciate the fattened doctors reappearance. Doctor Vanessa Van Holden’s weight gain reminded me of this pic: the secret of Victoria by garsedj. Perhaps the added heft makes her less active. So she can gain a little bit in her upper half, too, to balance out her unnaturally pear-shaped form.
I also like Riley, especially at the beginning of “The Swimsuit Challenge”, Lorna and Ricky's mom in the Fat Karma story. “Fat Karma” is a great and very amusing superhero satire. I have no doubt that it was fun to write it.
I also liked your story ”Scott Pilgrum Vs. The World” a lot. Scott Pilgrum experiences a reality nightmare. Nevertheless I like some of his ex partners, e.g. sweet Meena or Jackie. Jackie is blessed with a mind and body that retains everything. She is quite cute in her own dorky way. Such a coquettish smartASS! Quotes like these are iconic: “Seventy-two percent of men surveyed said a big ass is preferable to a smaller one when they are looking to settle down." – "I also read that by 2020 researches predict the average size for a woman from the United States will 22." – “Most men feel a larger woman gives better head.” I almost can see Jackie proudly patting her wide hips with both hands and say with a smug smile: “Scientists at the Universities of Pittsburgh and California analyzing data from a study of 16,000 women and girls found that pear-shaped women are brighter and produce more intelligent offspring, too.” I wouldn’t mind at all if you would let beautiful Jackie or a similar character reappear in another of your weight gain stories.
Also among my favorites are:
- Megan, the news anchor from “The Hormone Remote”,
- Pear-shaped Marissa, the magician’s girlfriend,
- Daisy from “The Lancaster Twins” with her big nose and her growing pear-shape and
- Selina in “The Long Fat Tuesday: Cheery-Chub“. I found the stuck catwoman easy to visualize, when I looked at this pic by Axel-Rosered: Commission - Thief Failure.
I also like Dr. Rachel Hvensky from „Psychic Reality”. This story reminds me of H. P. Lovecrafts horror fiction story „From Beyond“. „From Beyond“ features
- brain manipulation
- other realities invading our known reality
- a mad scientist in a uncanny room
- he works obsessively on his research
- his research work makes him crazy, evil, emaciated, his appearance deteriorates
- the mad scientist resents his old friends’ skepticism towards the revolutionary research he is doing
- the mad scientist leads his old friend into the uncanny room, where his shady experiments take place.
- the mad scientist attempts to retaliate upon his old friend for his skepticism.
You combine erotic weight gain with horror, fantasy und Science Fiction. Not an everyday intersection.
“Ester's Easter Event” is beautifully dark and eerie.
Finally, I like the rules of the game you describe in your story “The Fundraiser”. The word “soccer mom” sounded better in my ears after I read this one.
I noticed that your current residence is “Hell on Earth”. I hope it’s not as bad as it sounds. Otherwise I can only wish you good luck!
Kind regards, and keep up the good work!
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Well thanks for all the kind words. I appreciate it a great deal. Writing about weight gain is actually quite easy. Writing about weight gain in a way that interests someone other then myself is the hard part.
I think at some point I’ve tried to combine it with just about every genre there is with differing degrees of success. I’ve had fun writing every last story. That’s what keeps me writing. The comments, when I get them, are icing on the cake.
I try to give my characters depth. It makes the payoff that much better when the reader feels one way or another toward a character. I guess it’s similar to horror films if that makes any sense. When you can identify with a character you feel for them and it makes it that much scarier when they get stalked by the killer/monster.
You're right I was working with a artist who was going to illustrate a few scenes from an upcoming story, but with schedules being what they are that hasn’t gotten finished at this point.
Right now I’m just playing around with a few ideas, waiting for one to jump out at me as my next story.
Hell on earth isn’t all that bad once you get used to it. There’s a Starbucks so I make due.
Thanks again for the feedback.
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A lot of my writing time lately has gone to a collaboration. I'm doing some writing and an artist is going to do some illustrations for it.
As it goes with collaborations things tend to move slower. It's shaping up nicely so as soon as we get it done ill put it up.
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Nice to see you're still around. I wondered why I didn't see you at the old place, but as long as I have found your work, I'm satisfied. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks. Glad you found my little writing nook. I think it was just time for me to move on from the old place and this was the next logical place.
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Thank you for the Watch. I hope you continue to enjoy.
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hey elroycohen, any new stories in the works? I like your newest batch of stories
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Right now I'm working on one that was part of a trade of sorts. It's WG, but also pregnancy and lactation themed so I'm not sure if ill put that one up in the gallery. I got another one I've been chipping away at about a woman with a fitness obsessed boyfriend. She tries to hypnotize him to be more lenient in her exercise shedule. We'll see how that one progresses.
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oh ya? That sounds very intriguing, both stories! Can't wait to see what you've got!
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I'm pretty close with one. Just working on a good ending.
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Awesome! I'm looking forward to it
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Hey thanks, Vader. Good to see you around again.
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