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ZinniaSnowdrop [2013-04-10 00:14:03 +0000 UTC]

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ZeeCloud9 [2012-03-02 04:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to OAAH. This is my first Full Metal Alchemist Fan fiction. My name’s Zeecloud9- and no, I will not reveal my true name! Well, my first fan fiction was Trouble In Pandora which is up on FFnet, but it didn’t really get much attention, I don’t know why. In that fan fiction I felt as if I made to many amateur mistakes, and that the readers got so confused- because believe me, it looks amazing in your head, but then when I tried to write it down, either I had writers block or I couldn’t relate to it. I guess mostly because I have nothing in common with the oc, and I think I made her too mean. But enough of that- this isn’t about T.I.P… Of Alchemist And Heaven is a fanfic about the ugliness created by alchemy- especially those who are corrupt. Personally, I think Alchemy is amazing, I always dreamed of magic and scientifically impossible things to happen. Though not all the alchemist in history AND in the manga are all ‘Hitler status.’ The triple threat alchemist; Fallen Alseck, Crissilly Xhang, and Haida Baó Su.
Follow their adventure with the Elric brothers, as they discover the real meaning of being a ‘dog to the military.’
Oh, and if you haven’t already noticed, this story contains original characters. If you don’t like oc’s, then don’t waste your time reading this. This story is by no means going to be made as a profit; it’s for entertainment and fan service. I don’t own FMA, and never will, so don’t flame, me. This story loosely follows the Fma plot, but that’s it- loosely.
Hope you guys enjoy and review.


 
Present day in Central, Germany; Cross the continent into Wonderland

“Hey Fallen, listen to this!” The raven haired girl sitting next to the white haired teen gushed out in joy. In her arms was a large old heavy bind book, whom the white haired boy- Fallen glared at with a frown. He rolled his eyes, wishing that for once, his friend would leave that stupid book home.
“Haida, why did you bring that shit with you…” Haida gave him a offended look, but continued looking at her prized possession.
“… ‘The basic laws of Alchemy apply to all of the universe’s creations, all which are made up of matter’. So that basically means everything.’ The basic rules are; Matter. Decomposition and Reconstruction. States that under the law of equivalency you must give up something in order to obtain something else. Hans Reich Goodwright.’ That sounds a little off- usually it’s written as ’you must give something’ not give up. Huh, I wonder if that’s a typo…”
Haida closed the book, the action causing a thin layer of dust that lay on it to disrupt the air, making them sneeze. Fallen glared at her, hacking as he rubbed his eyes. “H-Haida, really?!!”
“”S-sorry!” She coughed. “I forgot.” His glare intensified.
“You could’ve left it with Felix. He’s looking after the apartment.”
Haida looked appalled. “Heavens no! It’s for my studies.”
“….” Fallen took the liberty to stare coldly to the occupied seat in front of him, itching with desire to wake up the sleeping boy. Fallen’s annoyance grew, and he lifted his foot casually, heavy leather combat boots hovering innocently over a sleeping boy’s face. Haida watched with wary, knowing well what was going to happen. His boots suddenly collided with the boy’s face, causing him to wake up in alarm and gasp for air. Hazel eyes glared holes accursedly at Fallen who looked uninterested in the situation. “Whoops, did I wake you sleeping butt face?” Fallen teased.
Crissilly growled, clenching his teeth. “What the fuck was that for.”
“Pissing me off.” Fallen answered back, looking out the window.
“In my sleep?” The raven boy retorted back. Fallen just shrugged. The train screeched abruptly, and every one hit their heads. “Ow!”
Haida clutched her head. “I officially hate steam trains.” Crissilly agreed. “Let’s never do this again.”
“What’s so special about Central anyway? I don’t see the point in being transferred to another place half a continent’s away. It’s ridiculous.”
Crissilly rolled his eyes. “Central, Germany- ring a bell?” “It’s one of the world’s leading countries in Philanthropy and Alchemy moron.”
“YOUR mother’s the moron here….”
Crissilly sighed with exasperation. “That doesn’t even make any sense because we’re orphans!”
“So? She had to be a moron to give birth to you!”
“Will you guys just stop fighting like an old married couple already! You’re making my head hurt.” Haida blurted out, interrupting their argument- or as she calls it, lover’s quarrel….. Not that they know that’s what goes through her head whenever they argue. Crissilly ignored the other boy as he stared at her, suddenly beaming with non-killer intent as he did to a certain colleague earlier. “sorry, I’m just a bit cranky cuz of our long journey, I guess… Not to mention spending four weeks on a boat that smelled like Fallen’s ass…..” He muttered the last part loud enough for Fallen to flip off the latter’s reflection on the mirror.
Haida nodded in agreement. “I hate steam trains, boats- I’d rather not even leave Shallajhe if it were up to me. Too bad Colonel Hughes got the mandate from the Council….” Crissilly stifled a yawn. “Oh yeah! Hey, wasn’t the Full Metal Alchemist transferred there too about two years ago?”
Fallen pressed his lips together as he looked back at the two. “As in Edward Elric?” Haida looked confused. “Elric? Who’s---”
“That’s Full Metal’s name.” Crissilly answered. “Oh- any chance you guys think the Colonel shipped our files to Central yet?”
Haida frowned. “Knowing the Colonel- he probably didn’t.” She said deadpanned. Crissilly and Fallen face palmed.

X * x * n l l n * x * x * x * X * X * X

Edward roamed the halls of Central’s hallways in an unusual, less that always foul mood, muttering incoherent things under his breath that the rest of the Dogs of the military could have sworn was a new found language. It wasn’t unusual to find the Alchemical prodigy in a foul mood- it’s just that today he just seems to ignore his usual death glares and ‘colorful’ language at anyone he deemed to rub off the wrong way. Of course, they wondered why he was in a particular mood today… Why, you ask? The ‘Dick Colonel’ sent Alphonse to escort the new Shallajhe transfers.
… And he also had to hand in his mission report.
Now it’s common knowledge around Central staff that Edward does NOT like the Flame Alchemist. No, it’s more like he despised the man with every alchemical fiber in his body. No biggie….
Nearing said Dick’s office, Edward was just about to burst in when he heard moaning from inside- making him instantly sick. ‘Do NOT tell me they’re actually- ew!’ Edward knocked loudly, coughing when no one answered. “Eh-HEM!!!” Losing his already thin patience, he burst in the door. He caught him with a secretary in a fierce lip lock… He was relieved to see they were still clothed… the Secretary girl lounged on top of his desk with her arms wrapped around his shoulders. They didn’t even seem to realize he was even there so Edward made a horrible hacking cough to get their attention.
Roy let out a groan, bidding the blushing girl goodbye. He cleared his throat, looking at the blond teen. “Major Elric, you’re here unusually early.” His downward smile turned to a bigger frown. “Just when I was getting to know Martha better…” He mumbled, making Ed scowl.
“Can, it sissy fire alchemist. Stop wasting your time trading germs with women and fooling around. Plus, her name is Peggy, NOT Martha.”
Roy smirked, although there was a hint of annoyance. “Still bitter you’re not with your brother right now?”
“No shit, wiseass! And whose fault would that be!” Edward retorted back, his scowl deepening.
“Careful Full Metal, I can unceremoniously demote you to serving Watchdog hours at Brigs.”
Edward grunted, the already thin patience he seemed to be born with, running thin. “Whatever. HERE!” The blonde threw his report at the Colonel’s desk without caring that some loose papers flew out of the Manila folder and fluttered around him. “It’s not my fault you’re useless on rainy days! I’m NOT going to be paying off the restoration checks for the buildings you burned off.” Roy mumbled something under his breath, pinching the bridge of his nose.
“I didn’t know they stored gun powder there, okay…?” Waving the thought of the incident away, he looked up at the Major. “You’re aware of the new transfers arriving today, right?”
Edward looked away boorishly. “Yea, so what?”
“Full Metal, I---”
“Forget it.” Ed interrupted with a grimace, glaring holes at him.
“You didn’t even give me time to give your order.” Roy said bemused.
“There’s no way I’m taking them under my wing- I’m not no friggin’ babysitter!”
“Well…” Roy trailed off, resting his arm on his chin as he grinned evilly. “That’s really a shame! Because that’s an order.”
Edward gave a displeased grunt, nose scrunching up in distaste. “Screw you.”
“Just for that, that’s 50 Merits off, Full Metal.”
“WHAT!”
“If you want to regain your Merits, then you’ll have to orientate the newbies. Either that, or Manners Etiquette class with Major Armstrong…”
“…………………..”Swallowing his pride, the blonde saluted his superior with narrowed slits. “Yes-ssssssir.” He forced out the words awkwardly.
Roy inwardly smiled. “That is all Full Metal- wait, I am craving that chocolatier’s crepe from that upscale Bakery down the block, mind getting it for me---”
“You’re pushing it.”
Roy waved his comment away. “Yeah, yeah… I expect you to be in here at 8:00’ clock when I call. Understand?”
Edward rolled his eyes, walking out of the room. “Sure, whatever…”
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“This isn’t anything like back in Shallajhe at all.” Was the first thing that came out of Crissilly’s mouth when the three stepped onto Central Grand Station. Looking around with awe, the trio walked off the platform into the heavy crowd, making sure the person most prone to getting lost- Haida, was smack in the middle.
Haida blinked in awe, a large smile adorning her face. “You’re right, but it is still very pretty….” She commented offhandedly at the grandness of the place.
Fallen let out an impressed whistle. “The economy must be hood here to build a place like this…” Setting down his luggage beside him, he eyed the Gold-imprinted Walls and columns. “That can’t be real!”
“”Transmuted Gold. It’s too pure to be valuable.” Crissilly answered, causing the latter to sigh.
“Pardon me.” The trio looked back to see a towering in a suit of armor looking down at them. “Are you three Haida, Crissilly, and Fallen from Shallajhe?”
Haida nodded politely, ignoring the obvious stares Fallen gave the guy. “That’s us.”
The tall boy gave a small bow. “Nice to meet you! My name is Alphonse Elric. Colonel Mustang sent me to take you guys back. How was the trip?” Crissilly smiled.
“Just awful.”
Alphonse seemed to get flustered by this, as he fiddled with his hands, pressing them together and looking down at the floor. “O-oh, Um I really sorry to hear that…” Crissilly shook his apology away, telling the boy to not worry about it. Out of nowhere, Fallen walked up to him with hesitation- before blatantly poking the confused boy’s armor repeatedly. His two companions glared at him disapprovingly.
“that’s so rude!”
Fallen shrugged at her. “What? He’s in a suit.” The white haired boy went back to staring at him as if he were the last meal on earth. “… We didn’t go back in time, did we.”
Crissilly groaned. “No! We’re not in the Medieval Times, okay?!!”
… Haida had to apologize to Alphonse after that….
“It’s okay- I can see how odd it may look, but brother said it’s part of my training to, um…. Pass the State alchemy Test!”
Haida smiled. “Brother- your last name is Elric, so I suppose this brother of yours is the famous Full Metal Alchemist, right.”
“Yup, that’s right!”
“Lucky you Al!” A shocked Alphonse stared at her. “What’s wrong? Oh!- is it that you don’t like to be called Al?”
Alphonse shook his head. “No, not at all! It’s just that I’m kind of surprised you called me by my nickname when there’s no way you could’ve known that, is all.”
“Well, you do look like an Al.” Haida said casually. “Plus, it suits you because it has a cute ring to it.”
Al blushed. “R-really?” He coughed awkwardly, rubbing the side of his head with a nervous laugh. “Uh-um, we should get going- Colonel Mustang is expecting us any time s-soon!...”
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Yay! Ch. 1 peeps! Hope so far this story looks like it’s heading in the right direction. Please REVIEW, AND I MIGHT JUST DRAW YOU ED. SERIOUSLY. CHECK OUT MY DEVIANTART: zeecloud9- add, request art, comment- whatev’s!


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z0mbiraptor [2009-12-30 17:28:26 +0000 UTC]

Hey,Zee happy early b-day or iz it ur b-day today try to make sure.

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ZeeCloud9 [2009-12-10 22:47:33 +0000 UTC]

checka, checka, checka, 1,2,3,4,5,6 go!
Rokkugo, rokkugo, rokkugo, mero me!
Rokkugo,rokkugo, rokkugo-mero me! srry, went super junior on ya -____-

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ZeeCloud9 [2009-11-21 17:35:27 +0000 UTC]

guess what i saw peeps, somone walking down my street wearing my fave charcter. they guy was dressed up as tykki mikk! *fangirl squeal mode* there was lavi & allen too, but i was too busy in my version of 'strike mode' to notice them wave at me... that made my day. i dunno, they were probally making a youtube video at central park or something, but mikk! *rants on* i luv him cuz he's dark tanned, barely see them muy macho dudes in anime....

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zuki212 [2009-10-19 02:28:01 +0000 UTC]

hey xio was up

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GrayWolfShadow [2009-09-13 23:25:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the watch^w^

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ZeeCloud9 [2009-09-05 07:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh ma gawd, schools a week away!!!!! Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuoooooooooooooooooo o!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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angi-chan [2009-08-26 18:01:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you for watching me!!

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Foxi-Loxy [2009-06-14 04:03:27 +0000 UTC]

lol its kenya!!!!!

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ChicoStyx [2009-06-10 21:20:57 +0000 UTC]

guess who~

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