VarnishedGrave In reply to Ensomniac [2020-02-16 20:10:28 +0000 UTC]

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VarnishedGrave In reply to amaryllis-bloom [2020-02-15 23:31:11 +0000 UTC]

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amaryllis-bloom In reply to VarnishedGrave [2020-02-16 01:00:55 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome

Sure thing, and first I have to say your line work is super clean and I'm especially jealous of how flawlessly you draw individual strands of hair (both of these are the bane of my life in my artwork lol). Of your first two pics all I'd suggest is lighten the really dark shadows/shading a bit in some places to differentiate shapes better, that way you wouldn't need the white outline (you actually improve on this in the second pic anyways). In any case, they all look pretty good

And just in general, I personally find youtube tutorials helpful for just about everything. I'll always recommend Draw with Jazza.

Keep up the good work!

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VarnishedGrave In reply to amaryllis-bloom [2020-02-16 02:58:23 +0000 UTC]

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amaryllis-bloom In reply to VarnishedGrave [2020-02-16 09:19:41 +0000 UTC]

No worries!

You're not wrong about the white outline, though I reckon if you wanted that effect it might look better if used throughout the piece where it can be
Absolutely, I agree you'll want to keep them shaded as dark as possible, it's more of a case of lifting up a few areas even if by a couple shades e.g. you used a grey background in the second piece so the figure stood out more, or alternatively you could keep a black background and make the pants really dark grey.

Heck, I'm no professional artist or anything and I don't critique often, so I hope I made sense lol

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VarnishedGrave In reply to amaryllis-bloom [2020-02-16 15:24:25 +0000 UTC]

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amaryllis-bloom In reply to VarnishedGrave [2020-02-16 18:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you! Hope you enjoy DeviantArt 

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