Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2014-04-29 00:24:02 +0000 UTC]

go ahead

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2014-04-30 17:51:12 +0000 UTC]

well first off I need to know what you like and dislike about DXS,what you think of the story so far, and any ideas you may have.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2014-05-02 18:31:36 +0000 UTC]

I like that you stay true to all the characters and how your original character blends in so well, it's enjoyable to read. I can't give you any plot advice since I know you have already have it written. I guess one advice I can give you is, you can try using photoshop or paint for your texts, but not that anything is wrong with handwriting. It is perfectly enjoyable regardless. 

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2014-05-02 23:11:16 +0000 UTC]

I see. thank you for your honest opinion, and yeah using photoshop for the text would ideal. and I am glad that you said that I stay true to the characters personalities, although I can't say stay 100% true to their personalties but I make sure to get as close as I can get.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2014-05-03 02:31:37 +0000 UTC]

keep it up!

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Papan-01 In reply to CIEI3 [2014-03-30 04:59:52 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2013-12-28 05:12:26 +0000 UTC]

alright dude awesome! been waiting for it for a while now.

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2013-12-28 23:30:21 +0000 UTC]

to tell you the truth I had finished it on december 21.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2013-12-29 04:12:47 +0000 UTC]

nice dude! upload it!

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2013-12-23 03:06:56 +0000 UTC]

yo did you play the battle of z demo? it's so fun

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2013-12-23 18:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I did but I don't have gold. so I cant play the full experiance

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2013-12-24 04:35:11 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I didn't really check out  the online, but they did an excellent job with the gameplay for sure.  

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2013-12-12 03:49:46 +0000 UTC]

no worries, take your time.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-23 13:33:16 +0000 UTC]

no probs, keep up the good work.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-17 18:11:42 +0000 UTC]

tell me what you have so far.

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-17 20:14:40 +0000 UTC]

the comic starts with Zokuen entering the seireitei and upon his arrival the soul reapers try to capture him (or in kenpachi's case to fight Zokuen.) eventually his battles with renji, rukia, byakuya, and kenpachi had allerted the other soul reapers to his location. however zokuen took out a madalion, (one side looks like a substitute soul reapers symbole and the other side has a ball with 4 star) hoping it would react and lead him to the one hes searching for. when it does not he tries searching out ki and found that a large power existed on a world, though puzzled he used instant transmission and found himself in karakura town and in front of him were two teenagers. one was chad and the other was ichigo kurosaki; all most immidiatly the skull side of the madalion glowed in front of Ichigo, zokuen realizing that he was the one he was looking challenged him to a fight. chad tried to intervene but quickly finds him self out matched, ichico used his badge to turn him self into a soul reaper and had asked chad to take his body and run. ichigo and zokuen changed location to fight. i'll tell you more monday.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-18 18:23:52 +0000 UTC]

awesome! please do! you really thought through this a lot and so far it sounds amazing....it can make an awesome 2 chapters with details.

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-20 01:38:26 +0000 UTC]

when the two arrived at the location, Ichigo asked why had zokuen been searching for him? Zokuen's response "the reason why is that have to kill the two heroes or my entire world will be destroyed." Ichigo did not beleave his story and they finally clashed swords with each other, however the soul reaper quickly realized that Zokuen is superior to him. so in order to even the playing feild ichigo released his zanpakuto to the bankai stage, and had urged zokuen to do the same. zokuen had tried but for some reason his zanpakuto remained in sealed form. The both of them quickly dismised it and continued their fight, dispite using bankai, the situation did not changed and Ichigo was getting desprite so he used getsuga tensho his zanpakuto signiture technique. but Zokuen simply deflected it with a mere wave of his hand and asked ichigo if he's got anything else he wants to try. "I do have one last trick." puts his hand over his face gathering black energy then in a ripping fashin a white mask appered on his face and he prepaired for another getsuga. this had shocked zokuen and while he was stunned the masked soul reaper fired his augmented technique. but Zokuen quickly reacted and though the technique had an intense power up, like before it was deflected. not believing his eyes ichigo charged but ZOkuen merely dodged and punched him in the face shattering the mask. ichigo generated his mask agian and attacked but this time Zokuen was fooled by Ichigo's after immage which allowed the soul reaper to appere behind him and using a close range getsuga tensho, sent the fighter to the ground causing a large amount of destruction to the surrounding area. I'll tell you more tomorrow.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-20 02:05:57 +0000 UTC]

holy awesomeness! you are a genious story maker! i can imagine how the fight is happening!so awesome. can't wait for tomorrow.

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-21 00:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Ichigo not believing that Zokuen would be defeated so easily surveyed the area. Zokuen emerged from the debris and had shown to have taken little damage though was unhappy that his upper gi was greatly damaged. the saiyan with some what of a sad looked at Ichigo and said "if you do not want to die then train and in three weeks I will open a portal to my world." after he had said that Zokuen released his zanpakuto Doragon Sereiyoku (dispite not being able to release it before) created a portal and left through it. the gate way he had created quickly dissapered and Ichigo was left to train.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-16 03:05:29 +0000 UTC]

of course. go ahead dude

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-21 00:46:52 +0000 UTC]

after returning to his own world Zokuen had to seek out the other hero so using his Zanpakuto once agian he created a another portal and entered. this time he arrived at a temple in the sky, high above the clouds and there were three people living in the temple. the tall green one known as piccolo confronted him, "who are you and what are you doing here?" Zokuen replied by saying his name and muttered to himself where is son? "Son." piccolo was surprise that Zokuen knew about goku. Zokuen was sensing energy and found the 3 greatist power was surpise at how strong they were and teleported via Instant transmission to one of the strongist power. i'll tell you more tomorrow.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-21 20:49:36 +0000 UTC]

epicness! now goku!...your story is so amazing it surprised me a lot. you didn't just combine the two mangas but made an awesome story behind it with your style and chaaracters. and i had this idea about a human type form of kamehameha! sounds silly i know but with a cool character design and charactersistics he can be awesome! actually super kamehameha. which is only goku and gohan used. like he meets ichigo's zangetsu. although kamehameha is an attack not a weapon, this could be awesome don't you think?

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-21 23:55:12 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I'll be able to put that in my story, but yes sounds interesting like goku was shinigami with a zanpakuto named kamehameha.
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in west city a saiyan named vegeta was training his son trunks in a place called the gravity room which could be found in capsule corp. as they were trainning zokuen appered in front of vegeta as he was throwing a punch, Zokuen was punched in the face and was sent flying out through the Gravity room door. vegeta and trunks hurried out the door to see zokuen slightly dazed, when he got up Vegeta asked him what is he doing in his home. vegeta quickly realized that Zokuen is a saiyan and Zokuen noticed that they are saiyans as well. Zokuen then said he sensed for the 3 strongest fighter on the planet and now he has found the one he was looking for. Vegeta smiled and said with pride "I AM the strongest fighter on earth and make sure you don't forget it. Zokuen then says with a smile "I won't even after I kill you.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-22 00:27:21 +0000 UTC]

that's awesome man! so when are you going to start drawing the manga?

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-26 20:47:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm still in the process of drawing chapter 3 and i need to fit ch.1 pg.4,5,6 in 11x8 format. plus I don't have a scanner MY friend lets me use his scanner, so I don,t like asking him every time I finished a drawing so I wait till 4or 5 drawing are finished. anyhow back to the story. A blue haired lady named bulma came out to see whats with all the comotion is and yelled at vegeta. immediatly she noticed Zokuen "Goku?". after being chewed out by bulma Zokuen asked if vegeta was son, and angerly he said no. then bulma says that son is Goku's family name, upon hearing this Zokuen was prepairing to leave but vegeta would not let leave with a fight. Zokuen not wanting to waste time used instant transmission to teleport to one of the other high power level at the same time escaping a angry vegeta.

by the way would you mind a doing a drawing for me?

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-26 21:49:43 +0000 UTC]

and i also didn't have any scanner for a long time....i know how it is. you should get one soon though cuz of your manga.

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-30 20:01:21 +0000 UTC]

some where on the pain of mount. paoz Son Gohan is trainning his younger brother son Goten and Videl Gohan's girl friend. as they were trainning Zokuen appeared via instant transmission. Goten at first glance immediatly thought that Zokuen was his father but Gohan knew better. "Which one of you is Son or rather Goku" Zokuen said asking gohan and Goten. Gohan responded by saying goku is their father and asked Zokuen was looking for him. "I'm here to kill him" Zokuen told gohan "could you tell me where he is I've wasted enough time"gohan said no and told Zokuen that he is going fight him.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-12-01 01:24:48 +0000 UTC]

amazing! btw i started drawing sax and lute.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-26 21:35:55 +0000 UTC]

i'd be happy to, let me know the things about the drawing, like the theme, what you'd want in the background and stuff. i'll start on the weekend.

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-28 02:11:23 +0000 UTC]

I would like to draw my second favorite character that I've drawn, Sax and his brother Lute. [link]
thats all for every thing else like what they'er doing and the back ground,you can use your imagination.

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-28 03:14:48 +0000 UTC]

yo, check out this fight scene from this anime called busou renkin. i think you might like the characters. it's the first fight of this video [link] [link] [link]

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Papan-01 In reply to victoryslayer49 [2012-11-28 02:50:02 +0000 UTC]

alright awesome! so they have about the same height right? and are the pants like piccolo's in the bottom? and the shoes?

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victoryslayer49 In reply to Papan-01 [2012-11-28 23:30:18 +0000 UTC]

actually sax the red nemekian is taller then his brother not by much though. as for their pants and shoes it's just like other nemekians.

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Papan-01 In reply to Flash-art-Light [2012-10-04 20:14:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks bro.

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Papan-01 In reply to Lady-Compassion [2012-10-04 20:14:08 +0000 UTC]

Hell yea! thank you

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