Ognipoten In reply to Thisoneauthor [2015-08-21 13:14:53 +0000 UTC]

But 1 question... in chap 7 why use mermando as an enemy of dipper and no gideon?

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Thisoneauthor In reply to Ognipoten [2015-08-21 13:21:09 +0000 UTC]

I believe I just used it as a small little comedy thing. I did have Gideon later on in the story as another potential bachelor. But that's really all I can think of as of why I did that. If you have any more comments or critiques, I'd love to hear them

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Ognipoten In reply to Thisoneauthor [2015-08-21 16:33:46 +0000 UTC]

oh, i see, i wasnt read that part because there was to late, the thing about mermando is that if recall it dipper didnt think that mermando was an arch-enemy and he was alredy marrieged with a manaty (dont really know how write it, i havent use my english in a time) but is a good touch you add he in the story and other question... Why bill? dont think i dont find interesting the idea is very original but didnt he try to kill them all?

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Thisoneauthor In reply to Ognipoten [2015-08-21 22:22:51 +0000 UTC]

The story that Bill and Mabel are having are in the same timeline of the original series I'm having. It's either I do a story about Bill and Mabel or Dipper and Pacifica. Other than that, the chapter name was Awesome Interviews With Amazing People Part 2, and it is chapter 2 of Marvelous Misadventures of A Pine Tree and A Llama

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Ognipoten In reply to Thisoneauthor [2015-08-22 00:02:56 +0000 UTC]

I see... well i just read the 15 chap of the story of dipper and pacifica and i find it pretty great and i can not wait for the next chap you are an awesome writter soon i will start with the mabel and bill story to try to find out what are bills goals with the pines

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Thisoneauthor In reply to Ognipoten [2015-08-22 00:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I appreciate everything you've said so far. I'm still actually on vacation. It was extended until Monday, should make a journal about that soon, But either way, expect something new soon

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Ognipoten In reply to Thisoneauthor [2015-08-22 04:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Well bro hope you enjoy your vacations

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Thisoneauthor In reply to Ognipoten [2015-08-21 19:02:05 +0000 UTC]

I just choose Bill as something that can also feed off of Mabel's madness. I didn't really think Mermando could mesh well as Bill, Since Bill is insane and Mabel isn't that far off. Pretty much, they would go well together personality wise. But maybe if you keep reading you'll know Bill's real reason on why he's with Mabel. If you have any other comment or question, I'd love to hear it.

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Ognipoten In reply to Thisoneauthor [2015-08-21 20:56:43 +0000 UTC]

hmmm, i just read the line when bill want pacifica to ask what is dipper is wearing and bro that was so funny!, that is one of the best jokes in the story,ok here is my quiestions, rigth now i gonna read
Awesome Interviews With Amazing People PT 2 CH 12
 what is that "PT"? that mean part 2? is there a part 1? and i see that other of your work is a story with mabel and bill is that a story that happens as the one with dipper and pacifica? like it show what bill and mabel does with wendy when they go for a pizza when dipper and pacifica where back in the house doing their stuff or is more like an a diferent story?

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Thisoneauthor In reply to Ognipoten [2015-08-21 21:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Very great questions, thank you for asking, I appreciate everything. If you have any other questions about any of my stories, let me know. But besides that, PT does mean part 2. Deviantart doesn't let me write to long of a title so I'll have to write it like that. But I was thinking about a story with Bill, Wendy and Mabel, but if I write it, I'll post it and let people know. Either than that, thank you for finding a joke funny, I also appreciate that

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Ognipoten In reply to Thisoneauthor [2015-08-21 22:09:29 +0000 UTC]

ok what is the full title of the chap? and the story with mabel and bill is diferent from the one of dipper and pacifica or it happen at the same time?

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Ognipoten In reply to Thisoneauthor [2015-08-21 13:13:13 +0000 UTC]

Hey, bro i has enjoied your work, i have to say your idea for the story is awesome and i love yours cliffhanging ending and the jokes on the chaps, i will write a critique of this but first i have to finish reading the all story

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Ognipoten In reply to mdizzle999872 [2015-08-20 23:42:29 +0000 UTC]

Sorry the double reply i wasnt sure if the first was sended

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mdizzle999872 In reply to Ognipoten [2015-08-21 00:30:14 +0000 UTC]

They got through

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Ognipoten In reply to mdizzle999872 [2015-08-20 23:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey bro, no need to thanking me, you deserve them

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Ognipoten In reply to mdizzle999872 [2015-08-20 22:58:51 +0000 UTC]

You earned them bro

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